| Reviews for Family Secret |
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my 2 guys chapter 1 . 3/31/2017 that was good keep the chapters coming |
Blackcurse01 chapter 1 . 6/18/2016 This brings me sadness and satisfaction at the very early (late) hour of 2:49 am. |
Jezzika of Medius chapter 1 . 4/16/2014 Pretty epic. |
Empress of the Abyss chapter 1 . 6/28/2013 You made me tear up... the simplicity of this work of art is just beautiful. The feelings were there it was just so genuine I could relate to them. Thank you for sharing this! |
Hopeful Puppy chapter 1 . 7/28/2012 That was amazing! Nearly brought tears to my eyes reading it to the end. The only reason it didn't is probably because I'm tired. I loved the start of it as well. Ayame throwing herself at Naruto is an absolutely hilarious thought! Well-written and very emotive! Well done! |
MelanisticLeopard chapter 1 . 3/19/2012 Naruto is so much deeper than the idiot villagers ever thought. It's so happy/sad. I think the first person POV came out fine (& another fic of yours I put off reading because I thought it would depress me). ..Lol. Minato's actually epic as a ghost. I wonder why Kushina didn't hang around as much. |
Crystal M. Key chapter 1 . 3/15/2012 I have a kind of sad smirk on my face; yeah, the morons of Konoha really don't know Naruto that well. Bittersweet is the perfect word for it. Excellent story, even with the first person writing (which I usually can't stand to read). Thanks! |
Fighting Ninja Neko chapter 1 . 12/10/2011 .. Wow. You have totally changed my perspective of Naruto Uzumaki and his parents. I applaud to you and your excellent writing. |
TheKeyofReason chapter 1 . 11/4/2011 I think this is the ONLY story I have read like this. And truthfully I can see it happening in the Naruto-verse. i only wish that I was better with words and could fill this up to the full 10,000 character limit, alas I am not and will only say this: Thank you for writing this story! ~Heiress of the Hyuuga |
River Flows Backwards chapter 1 . 10/11/2011 DX ah! Oh my god I don't even know what to SAY! DX that was so beautiful! AGHH oh my gosh you are an evil genius T_T Fantastic, amazing, wonderful, bittersweet, sad, happy, funny (Minato), depressing, mysterious, incredible... That and more was this. *clicks the favorite button* Yeah... this is so going on my Kindle :] |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2011 it was sweet and sad and i loved it! XD |
A Midsummer Night's Dreams chapter 1 . 5/2/2011 man, I would have wished that had actually happened!But still, it was...bittersweet, maybe.I'm not entirely sure. |
Midnight Promise chapter 1 . 2/21/2011 Greetings! I have been looking for well-written, sweet family fics with Naruto and Minato, and this one has been officially added to my favorites list. :) The opening paragraph was amusing and a good lead up, conclusion was good. The middle was perfect. :) Sorry, can't really say anything else besides "great", "spiffy", and left me content. Take care, MP |
CharmingKarma chapter 1 . 2/19/2011 This story was one continuous Awwww! Some of the good Awwwww!s that are a result of love and fluff and cleverly worded statements, the other Awwww!s are accompanied by sniffles and the urge to give those ghosts more ramen and pictures of Naru-chan _' This was fantastic and a great read _ Thankyou for writing it and posting it even though you weren't very content with it _ |
Drognen chapter 1 . 1/9/2011 Oh man that was a fantastic read, I've never encountered a Fic with this kinda concept before. Thank you so much for the great read. |