And you ruined the story at chapter eight. By making them gays. While not a problem to those who want a romance story. That’s not what most would come for considering the story outline. You failed in both making this just cringe worthy.

Hope to read more soon.

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I hope you write more chapters soon.

Shitty fic

Wow did you put in there?! Awesome, if you did. Havent found anybody whose managed to do that yet and ive been on for ages! Even if its not direct.

Oh my god! That was incredible, I especially loved the scene where Maria had a Filipino accent when she spoke parsletongue, too funny! Hope to see more soon!

I'm loving your references. They're making the necessary filler hilarious

Really? Matilda Honey? I thought that was where you were going, but then you gave her first name and I kinda sorta maybe snorted Pepsi out my nose at the cheesiness of that reveal

Please update when you can.

Poor Harry, they really are out to get him. I think they are watching to see if his model works and if it does, copy and paste. That or the Prez. kid is an MX.

This is quite the enjoyable fic. I love when Harry's dad to Teddy. I also love Sirius. I also also really love Harry/Logan. So really 3 out of 3, full marks, good job, YES. The explanation of the MX genes was nice too. I see it's been a while since this has been updated but I hope you come back to it sometime. Thanks for a fun read.

Pity this is on hiatus this story has ALOT of potential and is very good :) oh well.

This is a great story. Possibly my favorite x-men/hp crossover. I love that Sirius gets de-aged as well. :D Hope you continue it sometime.

Hahahaha! This is perhaps on the best/funniest chapters I have read. :D

Love the letter from Draco. :)