Nicely done.

This is such an interesting idea and story. Honestly, Zack having a vag is super hot, and you managed to keep him pretty much in character in spite of the "alteration." Of course, I always enjoy bossy bottom Sephiroth and dom Cloud, as well. Thank you for a perfect threesome story!

Soooo did he actually date Aerith or not? xD

Hojo is such a freak. And this story is awesome.

the begining of this was rather interesting. i love how this turned out though. i'd really love to see more of things like this

Damn!This was hot! ._.

Poor Zack! He couldn't get away from the 'Exhibitionist' and the 'Voyuer'. And I can't believe Seph bottomed! Zack looked like he was gonna faint from the just the idea! And little Cloudy got to top!XD

This is what happens when Hojo does a 'new experiment' on you! Zack should've known better! Adding the girly parts was awesome! And Seph pouting? AWESOMENESS! Though Zack is right, that's phony bologna!XD

vaginal-anus?

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You sly person, you.

This was very nice to read...lol.

...So much porn intake.

It's a good thing though.

Whoever thought up that prompt had to have been having a good day.

But it is you who has written this fantastic -if a bit strange- bit of smut. I don't know whether to congratulate you, or thank you.

Both!

Congratulanks.

Or something.

...

That was such a bad review. Hope I made my point though.

Christ. The smuttiest thing I have ever read in my short life. And Zack has a vagina? This is crack pwp. But enjoyable crack pwp.

Fan-f*cking-tastic.

So many awesome line in this ficlet, you're a genius.

"“meet Exhibitionist,” he pointed to himself, “and Voyeur,” he pointed to Sephiroth" HAWT DAMN!

"He inhaled deeply and closed his eyes. His breath was released in a groan of arousal, and his little, pink tongue came out to lap at the slickness.

Sephiroth’s eyes darkened to the point of being nearly black." Wow, you write arousal brilliantly, it feels so real.

"“I could give you that face,” Sephiroth smirked, and then he pulled his expression into one of the most ridiculous pouts Zack had ever seen" Oh God, I couldn't even imagine that! Seph pouting? This bit was hilarious.

My absolute favourite part:

"“How about this,” Sephiroth said as he slid off [...] moth about to commit suicide in a flame." My brain was fried during this part. This is the first time that I've had the pleasure of seeing Seph walk like a stripper and his hot hot hot words to pursuade Zack were to die for.

Not many authors can write a bottoming Seph convincingly and you've tried and succeeded perfectly. That was pure hotness.

Thank you for posting this!