Fantastic...

Wow. You really captured it. It was so well written. I could just hear Michael speaking. Bravo!

Wow. This was powerful, beautiful. Really liked it.

That was awesome! MY favorite line: "Fiona…I said shoot him a nasty look, not shoot him!"

that was great!

thanks for posting :)

Clever and very accurate.

Good job!

Emily

Greetings Petunia846

That is adorable! I just love the image of matching shoe & gun sets. I know I should say something helpful, (critical) but I really liked it and thought that it was sweet and captured both the feel of our beloved show, as well as the tone of your original piece. Thank you for that bright moment.

Aw! That was lovely, a great glimpse into Fi/Michael dynamics. The ending was really sweet.

This isn't the first story of this type in this fandom, but i enjoyed it a lot. It's simple and powerful and the ending, that last instance of yelling "Fiona!" was perfect.

Can I say how much I absolutely adore this? Why yes, I can. I love this. It's simple, but wonderful. After having watched the show for so long, I can see it all in my mind, and you've captured the characters wonderfully. Fantastic.

auw:)! that was so good!

very nice story.

aww that was adorable. nice work.

OH! you nailed it! I LOVE YOU

you are another rare talent in the BN community you must do more i beg of you!

Nicely done.