good stoyr please update soon

Lately I've taken an interest to L4D stories and I have been making my way through nearly all the ones on this site. (Which I don't really recommend unless you have a substancial amount of time on your hands. lol!) So I can say that I have some experience (I haven't actually played the gameD:) when I say this is an AWESOME fanfic! So far you've got the characters down pat! lol I love Ellis' attitude! (I've noticed almost everyone seems to end up with the L4D 1 or 2 characters as well) You describe everything with just the right amount of detail and keep the story simple enough to understand, which i greatly appreciate since it's hard enough to go through so many stories without having to try and figure out what's going on! I've always been very intruiged by the "witches" and why they cry. They also seem like the most approchable characters, since you can't even be within throwing (or spitting, or pouncing, or tongue lashing) distance to any other infected without it going berserk! I can't wait for the next chapter! Great job! P.S only found one error!

Good story so far. Update soon! I'm surprised that the other survivors didnt kill the witch when she appeared on board. But then again they probably witnessed her saving Eric. Update sooN!

*stare*

This is like the first L4D2 fic that I've actually liked... You know, that didn't mesh cliches with poor writing quality and everything...

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OMG YOU DESERVE A HUG! This is awesome! This is like a lump of gold in the middle of oceans of mediocrity and grit. I really like, particularly, how you stayed true to the L4D2 survivor's personalities while adding an OC very believably.

One warning, though. If Eric's confidence is as shot to hell as I think it might be, he'd be pretty...well, dispondent for a while. At least, until the other survivors and the Witch manage to convince him he's not useless. You could milk like two chapters out of that.

Good luck!

~ Lang

Naaw...:D

*likes the friendship*

PLease have more soon! :D

Neat chapter, though I was hoping for a little more interaction between Eric and his new friend. Good cliffhanger though.

Wow! This is different!

I really like this story. It has great promise!

And now i feel like some kind of... I don't know... a character from some story... -can't remember the name- Oh well.

Wow wow wow. Epic.

-gwomps- Update soon!

~Dawn xx

I like this chapter, but the ending... not so much... just all of a sudden its overrun wouldn't they get a contact or message about that? and also "zombies can use guns, we know that much"

I laughed at that, dont change it ;3

"Oh sorry boy. I forgot you got shot for about ten minutes. Hope you aren't bleeding too bad!"

That is what went through my mind! Nice story you got there. There is one thing I want you to get over though, as much as other new authors have to get over as well:

DON'T FUCKING WORRY ABOUT UPDATE TIME!

You actually have some talent and you aren't writing a Ellis/Nick story! Hell, you are writing what could possibly a good Witch story! Apart from mine (Evolution), Cry Witch and maybe two others, there are barely any good Witch stories around here. WE WILL WAIT FOR GREATNESS

With your writing, you should be hitting the high-calibre type of chapters anyways, 3500 words. Try that as a goal and you'll see chapters improve well, you have a good set-up for next chapter to be that large.

As a side note, that was a Military chopper in the game, not a CEDA.

No worries on the update time, it was well worth the wait. Nice choice in introducing everyone and killing the freaked pilot... Oh well, he was becoming a problem anyway. I also liked what you did with the witch, having her strain to talk, that was smart. All in all, nice update, can't wait for your next.

The Sage of Water,

~ConGie

I agree the meeting was a little rushed, but now I'm anxious to see how she interacts with the other immune survivors. Please continue

I like this a lot. I still have the second chapter to read, but I'm invested and anxious to see where this is headed. Though I'm a little biased since I like the witch and pity her as well (she's in a couple of my stories). Good job so far!

keep the chapters comin'

heya,

this story started out interesting and great,

just want to point out that you used eric's name too much to describe his actions though. but not that it bothers me or anything just pointing it out )

keep up the good work, im subscribing to this story :p

ciao.

Finally, another good witch fic! It kinda seemed like you rushed the witch, but you made up for it with an awesome entrance. I didn't really think that you were going to kill the big guys off, however I am VERY glad you did. Nice ending too, I love the many stories of Ellis XD

The Sage of Water,

~ConGie