| Reviews for New Chance, New world |
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   HappyxZoro chapter 8 . 5/7 C'était parfait j'aime tellement ce couple encore plus quand Harry a des enfants et les porte |
| Sephiroth'sGhost chapter 1 . 3/30 why is everything in first person? *flails away to some other fic that isn't confusing* no offense but this formatting style is a bit much... |
| Meganrae1234 chapter 8 . 10/23/2018 epilogue* channeling* Seems* |
| Meganrae1234 chapter 3 . 10/23/2018 I love the story so far and i know that i will love the rest of it. However at some point you should go through and correct the spelling mistakes. Its a bit annoying to read metal as meddle and second as secant. Other than that the story is very entertaining. |
| HoneyBear84 chapter 8 . 5/3/2018 Aww loved it, is the epilogue instead of a sequel or as well as a sequel |
| Chaos-Rave chapter 8 . 1/25/2018 Aww that was cute. |
| grammerly chapter 4 . 12/17/2017 - metal - second sorry, really distracting 2 have repeating spelling mistakes the story is really good otherwise, |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/7/2017 It's not meddle it's spelt metal |
| TashaLee2476 chapter 8 . 1/4/2017 Loved it. What happened to logan's brother did he change? Did the brotherhood change or stay the same human hating mutants? |
| BadgeryFox chapter 8 . 11/24/2016 This story is also by you! OMG you really are talented and if I may say a minx that enjoys making me hot from reading lol This was my second time reading this story, I enjoyed it very much (again), now excuse me gotta take care of something XD |
| KoreanMusicFan chapter 3 . 11/7/2016 meddle, do you mean metal. and second. |
| Jeez chapter 1 . 4/21/2016 Harry sound like a whine witch. Saying how hard he had when Remus knows what it's like to have a hard life with the ministry against werewolf. For a twenty seven year old, he's very immature. He sounds like he want a pity party. |
| ShatteredDragon chapter 8 . 4/13/2016 i enjoy your stories but there are a couple things that bothered me such as you typing your instead of you're however i can get over those the biggest thing that makes your stories hard to read is your constant use of the word secant when im pretty sure you mean second i know im probably coming off bitchy and i really dont mean to its just really hard to enjoy the story when i have to stop for a moment and translate the word to what its suppose to be. that said i really like your stories and i hope you keep writing. |
| lisa.francis.96780 chapter 8 . 2/27/2016 overall a good story. a little polishing for grammar, spelling etc would help thanks for sharing |
| lisa.francis.96780 chapter 4 . 2/27/2016 you keep mentioning the mother but you have never explained who/what she is. I am guessing maybe magic but not totally sure. |
