A nice idea though I don't like the fact you made Slytherin's pretty much "bad guys" even though Scorpious wasn't- why is he an "expection"? Can't he see that not all Slytherins are bad?

I'm surprised he was allowed to be Head Boy, with McGonagall for Headmistress. And it's a pity that he thinks he can't possibly be good and a Slytherin at the same time.

No doubt that's why McGonagall is confused there at the end; I expect she has trouble with the same thing.

Nicely done.

That is a wonderful story! I absolutely love it! It's joining my favorites!

Very bittersweet, I liked it.

This is a very nice character study of Scorpio. I've always been a fan of Draco because I think that he has overcome a lot, but I like that it is the next gen that will really be their own people. A lovely concept and a lovelier piece.

Aww, this is cute! I love it!

(*_*)

It was very well written! I liked it, it showed an almost softer side of Draco.

You're truly an amazing writer, the only suggestion I have is for you to somehow break up the scene changes in a more obvious way, such as putting a hyphen in. Or maybe that's how the story was supposed to be, anyways, I loved it.

The characterization of Scorpius was great and it's nice that you wrote about him overcoming Draco's reputation.

Reallyreally fantastic work.

~Pyro

Excellent story.

Thank you for taking part in my challenge! This was a really lovely fic! Very heartfelt and superbly written :)

This is a good story!