I really love this story, very in character

Great story, love it

Great fanfic

UPDATE PLEASE!XXXX

Im guessing that soon never came? but hey i havent given up and neither should you this story is too awesome to go unfinished! and hey theres another mass posting in two weeks you can do it!

Love the story. I hope the next chapter isn't another year away.

Too tired to give insightful review that this story deserves (but will later!)

UPDATE PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAASSSEEEEEEEE!

You are an absolutely FANTASTIC writer, and this is a FANTASTIC fanfic so far. I completely love the dialogue between Sam and Freddie, and you've kept them in character so well. Carly as well, but Sam and Freddie are what really intrigue me. Not only because they're the central characters in this story, but their whole relationship is revolved around this love-hate dynamic they have, and you portray that extremely well. I've seen a lot of fics that do the same, but yours is one of the few that draws people completely in, and even with the fact that you don't update any of your stories very often (shame on you btw), those people are willing to go back and read everything from start to finish and say, "wow, this is still just as amazing as I now remember it being."

Keep writing. You have a lot of talent, and like many of the other people that read your stories, I really hope you update VERY soon. That goes for 'Breakeven' too! ;)

oh...ehm...gee...do you know what happened in the time it took you to update? i graduated high school, got a job at some resturaunt bussing tables, attended my grandmas funeral, went to a wedding-oops, sorry, i meant TWO weddings (i was one of the groomsmen at wedding #1), got fired from my job for threatening a customer (if you were there, you'd be so annoyed you'd threaten to hold her head underwater too), got my car towed and my liscensed suspended (not my fault btw, that guy was clearly at fault. but they always blame the rear-ender), got hired as a cashier at a Ray's food place near where i live (i had to pay off the damages to that guys car somehow), broke 2 knuckles slamming my fingers in the register at said Ray's (...that one i cant explain), and attended another funeral for some relative i didnt know (he was like 80. but he didnt die of what you think. lets just say a man his age shouldnt be riding harleys. well, really nobody should). and now i have to wait again for another update? when the chapter is this good i can. i have another grandma anyway

Ok, I've read the three chapters. Now I'll give feedback :]

First of all, I can tell you and The Earl are friends because you both have such a clever and witty way of portraying "children show" characters in an older and yet still accurate way.

I appreciate that in stories, especially since most people take fanfiction and just turn it into smut -.-

Well, anyway, I really did like the concept of tutoring for initiation, and I didn't think it was cliche at all in the way you portrayed it.

I hope you update it soon-don't wait another year!

I am LOVING THIS. I think your characterization and dialogue is the best out there. I do wish I saw that dance! Hah, but in all honesty I am lovin' on this stuff, can't wait to read more.

I keep forgetting about this story because it's updated infrequently, but then I reread it and remember why I like it so much. I look forward to Carly's plan and where else the story goes, because it's well-written and interesting and funny and smart. Excellent work.

Here's my favorite lines:

- He wasn't sure how sanity it was to eat anything that Sam had put her fingers in but on the other hand he had, had her tongue in his mouth which he was sure was worse.

- "...Like, with Gibby I don't care because let's face it he's not even really a person-"

- "You know this is why his therapist requested you guys don't share any classes anymore."

- "Urghhh? What does that mean? What happened?"

- "Sam really does treat Gibby horribly, I hope those pills he's on now are helping," Carly paused, as if realizing that wasn't the point.

- "...But, I mean, she took the pre-test for her finals the other day and aced them all. I'm not saying she didn't cheat, but she passed."

Anyhow, if you updated soon it would be awesome :)

I'm liking where this is going..

Sam and Freddie are spot on, Sam is hilarious! With all of her crude humor. His 'head' ahaha.

Can't wait for this plan. I always have Carly meddle in my stories too.:)

Update soon :)

xm

Great story so far. Found a couple of mistakes but nothing glaring. with all of the angst that I've been reading lately, its nice to read something light for a change. I'm really glad this one hasn't fallen by the wayside, as is prone to happen with these types of fics.

In any case, fantastic job. really enjoyed it.

til next time,

Deuces

KL21

Ahhh...

I'm bathed in sweetness and light!

(and Champagne Scenes update!)