This story has plenty of potential. It stopped on kinda a cliffhanger but at least H/G are together I guess. Haha.

Okay...

I've never been into au before, but this story is really instrasting. I do hate how yo ended at a cliffhanger, and I do hope that you'll update sometime soon(:

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So wonderful to see a new chapter! Thanks for not abandoning this.

Last chapter James introduced himself as James Smythe. But in this chapter Ginny refers to him as James Anderson. Which one is it?

It's a good thing James didn't suggest that he come to breakfast with everyone at the Burrow-that would have been rather awkward for everyone.

I'm really surprised that there aren't more reviews for this story. It's well written, it has an interesting premise that I haven't exactly seen before, the typos and misspellings are minor (although a beta would fix that), and the characters are reasonable compared to canon. However, Dumbledore does appears to be more secretive. I wonder if he'll tell Snape he knows that Harry is alive? I assume Snape hasn't mentioned it.

Please don't make this too angsty. I'm sure there will be some conflict between Harry and Ginny - no one's relationship can be that perfect. Just don't make Harry the overly cliche moody fanfiction character. He's had a nicer upbringing in this story.

I was expecting Ginny to see a picture of James and Lily at their house and notice the resemblance to her James (Harry). It still could happen, I suppose. Or more likely Remus will recognize the similarity when he and Harry meet. Or even MORE likely, you'll tease us with those two realizations ALMOST happening. Maybe even multiple times.

Looks like there was a HUGE writing break between chapters 3 and 4. I hope real life is going well for you. Looking forward to more of this story being posted.

I'm really enjoying the story, but I feel like I've read it somewhere before. Have you posted it on another site?

~R

James Anderson, eh? He introduced himself as James Smythe in Ch 3, so you may want to fix that. Overall, excellent story, and even though I've seen more than a few fics where Ginny finds Lost Harry, you have enough unique elements to keep it fresh. KUTGW

damn really nice

though update more often, you just can't keep us hanging like this. its cruel.

i wonder would harry ever be able to do magic? and how did Remus secure a job in ministry? is the soul of Voldemort still inside harry?

the way u described harry's appearance i do guess that that moment somebody who knew his parents see him, they will know who he is. i was expecting u will change harry's appearance a little bit like longer hairs and contacts. but i do like to see where u go with this

also really sad you killed of Molly and Aurthur Weasley

update really soon please!

Great chapter

I've just started reading your story, so this is my first review. I have to say, your unique story has rather captured my interest already. I'm really looking forward to seeing where things go from here. How Ginny and Remus will find out what happened all those years ago and how "James" will react when he learns Ginny is a witch, and the secret of his own past.

Can't wait for the next update!

please finish this.

SERIOUSLY AMAZING! UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! Plus, I still want to know what happens in Fleetness of Time! Put me out of my misery!

This story is amazing! Promise you won't abandon it!

The characterization is really good, as is your writing, just the right balance between action and thoughts. And the way you give out bits and pieces of their history makes me want to know everything; so I really hope you will continue this.

I especially liked the aws you wrote their dealings with Dumbledore: not the usual Dumbledore-bashing that one can see in every other story, nor unwavering admiration that he knows everything and can do no wrong. I really liked that.

~BlueSphinx

Nooooooooo! love this story, and yes there are a few errors but they are small and forgettable compaired to the over all plot and design.

Please continue the story, I deffinately want to see more.