| Reviews for A Fresh Start |
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   Gomez Addams of Addams Family chapter 4 . 3/20/2013 Emily poulsson |
| that kiwi chick chapter 4 . 5/28/2011 Great story! |
| romantichopeless chapter 4 . 2/16/2011 Hi there, I have really enjoyed your Esme/Carlisle (although I havn't seen him in the story yet!) story so far. Are you going to write any more? Its really good and actually quite unique as there seems to be almost no Carlisle and Esme all human stories out there on fanfiction. It is well written so far and has a great plot. Please continue writing! Thanks so much, Amy |
| carrie chapter 4 . 11/3/2010 love it |
| songhamitra chapter 3 . 4/17/2010 seriously,i came to write here just cuz i was scared that you might actually turn in into a esme-felix story.. |
| songhamitra chapter 4 . 4/17/2010 nice...u have a really good command of language and i love this chapter... |
| A person you don't know chapter 4 . 3/1/2010 Hello... I loved this story because it has a great plot! Hopefully this unknown writer will keep on with her wonderful stories... If you agree with me pm her, if you have it! Emily Pulson is the answer to your trivia... |
| janispsnipes chapter 4 . 2/17/2010 I don't know, but it sounds more like Mark Twain. Thanks! ;) |
| TINKS83 chapter 3 . 2/8/2010 Loved how you used the bird spreading it's wing to signify what Esme hopes to do with her fresh start... Beautifully written... You should be extremely proud of yourself. Looking forward to the next chapter and where you take this... Keep it up pixie tinks x |
| TINKS83 chapter 2 . 2/8/2010 Very well written chapter... Again, it's extremely descriptive and it helps set the scene and put your mind in the place that it takes place. Love that you've introduced a couple of other characters... Great job pixie tinks x |
| TINKS83 chapter 1 . 2/8/2010 Fantastic opening... Portrays the emotions behind her thinking and extremely descriptive. Pulls you in and leaves you wanting more... Brilliant job pixie tinks x |
| janispsnipes chapter 3 . 1/28/2010 Very interesting that Marcus has a wife, Didyme no less, in this story. Seems like she could keep him in line (he seems to have a bit of an attitude). The panic attack and the gull conversation were intriguing too. Thanks for the dedication. Those of us who don't write are very grateful to those of you who do. Thanks again for sharing. ;) |
| Ebony chapter 2 . 1/19/2010 Oh, poor Esme! Embarrassing way to introduce yourself. Very interesting start, I'm looking forward to another chapter. Nice to see a fic of this type focusing on Esme, she's way too overlooked in fiction. |
| janispsnipes chapter 2 . 1/18/2010 Very interesting. Haven't read an Esme story in a while. Was it an inside stairwell? I couldn't quite follow where the water spilled (first thought it was outside) and if so why it was such a worry. Looking forward to seeing where you take this one. Thanks. ;) |
| Warrioroftheseventhstar chapter 1 . 1/17/2010 Really good focus on the emotions with the casual exchange on why she feels that way. good to have you back! |
