This is great and very ejoyable! I was laughing and sighing at the same of what first time lovers have to endure. Brilliant!

It's so nice to read a realistic sex scene for once, where everything doesn't go just right! Not that the perfect ones are a bad thing, either, but it is a refreshing change to see what might REALLY have happened in that tent with two inexperienced people. Nicely done!

OMG, this is awesome! Why have I not read this? This is the best Alistair sex ever!

this is quite good.

i like how you did a lemon that neither wardens arn't well versed in sex that they are virgins

Thank you for writing virgin/virgin sex the way it's supposed to be. Too many virginal templar sex gods around these parts.

There should be more awkward virgin sex, and I like the mix of awkward and sweet and trying again until they get there. Lovely :)

Wow, Tas. This is great. You have totally have "awkward virgin sex" down pat. Maybe you should write some more? .~

Great job. It wasn't too cheesy and very realistic.

*snorts* You almost made me kill myself coughing.

I am...finished. hehe. I love Elishka's realization "That's it?"

Oh how I love smut :D but this is the good kind... the giggly kind XD you managed to get the right ammounts of just about everything into that story and still keep the characters (yes, I'll have my Warden with a pinch of sass please) true to themselves. Now... write some more :D

Loved it! Though I think maybe Alistair could add a verse to that SNL song Jizz In My Pants :)

I laughed, I cried from laughing, I laughed some more.

Much 3.

You totally got me at "I kind of finished" :-D Thanks for the giggles, I needed that.

Hahahah - yes the first time. True to form, great writing. 3 3