| Reviews for Oops |
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   FleaBee chapter 10 . 9/14/2017 This story was just getting fun. I really do hope that you continue this story one day. |
| Takai-taka chapter 10 . 11/16/2016 Noooo that was just getting good... I want to know what happeneds |
| Astral Dragon Spirit chapter 10 . 5/3/2016 Hopefully one day I'll know how they get out of this mess. You've crafted a very complicated situation for them. |
| XxElementalStormxX chapter 1 . 10/19/2015 Idiot |
| lilyoftheval5 chapter 10 . 11/30/2014 What a lovely mess... |
| ii L0V3 TH3 PRiiNC3 chapter 10 . 10/21/2014 love it! |
| Death101 chapter 10 . 4/29/2014 Hey. Can't sign in if I want to leave a second review. I was just reading this chapter and taking in more details. I didn't really pick up on the danger Goten was highlighting at the end of the chapter the first time I read it but this time I noticed it and damn. Now how are they going to fix that? Also, I didn't really pick up on Goten's frustration due to being so excited to see Future Trunks. Again, second read-through's are awesome. I like how Goten spoke up for himself and how we got to see a little bit of Goten instead of just the Trunks' "sob story" (awesome description for it by the way). Anyways, awesome job! Please update eventually! -D101 |
| ZH9 chapter 10 . 12/28/2013 :D update soon |
| m.trunks chapter 10 . 9/12/2013 More please girl pleeeeeeeeaaaaassssseeeee? |
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/6/2013 Omg please continue I love the story so much! :D |
| Shinyakogamifan chapter 10 . 3/17/2013 Please Continue! can't wait for the next chapter! |
| WarAngel24 chapter 10 . 3/8/2013 I love it! :D Continue soon please! |
| threeam inkblot chapter 10 . 1/31/2013 more pls;) |
| elae-chan chapter 10 . 1/29/2013 Oh you better continue on mister ! Or I'll be sorely disappointed ! |
| Death101- Fox Version chapter 10 . 1/29/2013 The more and more I read this story, the more and more awesome it gets. Especially from Trunks POV when Future Trunks shows up. I know I should feel a little bad for Future Trunks since he literally has no clue what is going on but darn it! I just want to hug Trunks after his narration of being overshadowed since he was born. And wow... if they stick around long enough there will be three Trunks... What will we call the new one?! Anyways, nicely done. It got a little confusing and the detail dropped off a little when Future Trunks showed up but given the situation, it makes sense and I don't really have any recommendations or suggestions other than please keep writing! -D101 |
