And another masterpiece by Desperatembrace. You are quickly becoming my favorite author. The reverse astrological twins thing actually threw me in for a loop, though- is that actually something in mythology? It's really interesting. Not to mention it would make an interesting point in the actual series, if their relationship was expanded on.

i don't see why it's an M... maybe T , T , but M... ?

Lov it

Great chapter. I had a paintball party when I turned 18...it was awesome!

This is the third story that I picked up from your profile and I have to say that I really like your writting style :3
But poor Ichigo- it's not really fair to him. it makes me wonder if something might happen to Grimmjow as well

This doesn't sound like a very good game for Ichigo to play with Grimmjow. He's going to feel not just the shots that Grimmjow lands, but the shots that he lands on Grimmjow.

I'm still going through your stories, having only just started, but I can honestly admit that I find your writing style to be quite fluid and enjoyable to read. You write at a good pace and keep interest by adding new twists to recycled ideas for your plot. It's very enjoyable and refreshing. Your development is also on par both in your characters and the gerneral progression of the story.
You seem to be a rather positive (perhaps stubborn is a better term) person to have so much going on yet still have time to produce such lovely works. Personally, I don't understand the joys of writing however I do take pleasure in reading works such as this and so I hope you take just as much pleasure in producing them.
I'm not sure if you will see my review as this story was last updated roughly 5 years ago to date (I don't have an account so my understanding of and reviews is lacking) however I thought it better to at least leave something that you might see.
So in hopes that you see this message, a quick thank you and well wishes.

good story

I loved it!

I loved this! It wad cute! :)

So, I read this story before I started saving the stories I liked, and recently I had been trying to find it again. I went to the bleach fanfiction archive and FINALLY, on page 45 of goodness knows what, at around midnight, I found this story. I started reading, hoping that I had found it, and... triumph! FYI, I hope you can infer how much I liked this story from the fact that I went through 45 pages to find it.

SWEET! My second date ever was to go Paintballing! I loved it! In my mind, it was the best date I ever had. (mostly because my bf was always shot out before I was.)

Holy crap that phone thing happens to me ALL THE TIME. All my friends are guys so when they text me my mom's always all "who is it? Is it a boy? Is he handsome? Do you like him?" and it's so annoying...

It was great! Good Luck in your future works!

nice, love the whole ichi in pain when grimm's in pain bit. wonder what you have in store for them hmmmmm