This was incredible. Oh dear god. I don’t know how to begin. This is one of my favorite stories on FF now, holy shit. This is a hidden gem that I found by chance, and it was so good that I read it all in one night. If you ever write more Dip stories like this, I will definitely read them and leave reviews. This was greater than I can put into words. Thank you for writing such a beauty of a story.

Ugghhh I wish there was another chapter with the rest of birthday festivities;) but that was really well done, I love the way you write Dip :)

that was epic

As much as I didn't like the over-the-top author notes, and the introduction in an earlier chapter where you complained about not getting enough reviews on your other stories, this was a decent read. 6/10, man. Kudos. And, don't fret over lack of reviews. I mean, you get what you get, and you shouldn't be pissy over it. It might come off as shallow to some people, and that would just get a bit messy.

Hey, I am really enjoying your story so far, it's entertaining. But I do have one critique for this particular chapter. When Damien is explaining the physics question to Pip and giving the answer, well, having taken physics I can say with relative certainty that the answer was incorrect. When dealing with Newtons, it is more likely that the answer would be below 1000 N since from my own homework, numbers such as 342 N and 400 N are used for vehicle related questions. And just yeah, that bothered me. But great otherwise :D

I love your little talk thingys at the end! They are hilarious :P

The last bit of this chapter was literally one of the hottest things I have read, and so thank you :)

But only mormons go to heaven

It can be spelled either 'blonde', the feminine way, or 'blond', the masculine way, but it does not really matter.

This was amazing! I loved it so much, this is by far the BEST Dip story I've ever read! I love how you kept them in character and especially how you gave a happy ending but not right away.

*-* oooooohhhhhh...daimiens a potty mouth!poor innocent pip!;)lllllllluurrrvvvvv the story so far!

Frick. FRICK. I was so ready at the end GOD dang it. Ugh it was gr8, and i forgive you for killing Pip, I knew you would give it to us. There is nothing that needs forgiving, my child.

Oh my god, I’m crying right now. Like, from sadness, and joy, and pure ecstasy that this ended happily. OuO I just love this couple so much, and your writing is like chocolate for my eyes. xD I must say, I’m a little disappointed that you cut off the sexytime scene, but my corrupted little mind can figure it all out from there. 3
I’ve been in this fandom for a few years and I can say, honestly and truly, that you are the best author I have ever come across. Your writing has moved me very deeply – I was sobbing hysterically during Chapter 11, and was laughing like a maniac and shedding happy tears at the end. ouo Just wonderful. Don’t ever stop writing, you wonderful creature. xox

This was EXCELLENT! I love your storytelling and you little extras at the end of each chapter! Can't wait to read more from you!

omg! I just have to say this: I am loving the story so far but I absolutely adore you're convos with Damien and Pip at the end! Now back to this awesome story 3