*Laughs the entire time*

THAT. WAS. GENUIS!

That was a brilliant sequel to A short story about Munkustrap and Demeter. It was actually hilarious. If reading Terry Pratchett makes you write these stories then please read more.

I. Loved. It.

You're a genius! I was laughing the whole way through. Your rambling got a bit annoying at some parts, but it sounded like Lemony Snicket.

Good work!

Also incredibly random! I have initiated my family by force by incessantly playing the soundtrack/watching the movie/singing various Cats songs at several decibels higher than is healthy.

I kinda liked it but you have some serious improvements to do. Don't give up writing for that's sake. I mean noone is pro at first. First. You have to make the characters somewhat believable. They were really out of character. You should do this funny little inputs here and there but be careful it doesn't get to much. You shouldn't be writing so much (Metaphorical ofcourse) and stuff like that. Everyone gets that anyway. Writing "on her metaphorical cloud worked just fine though" The thing I found funnyest was actually the " I do not believe in Fate. And it’s perfectly safe for me to say that cos I’ve got her favourite lipstick! _" Please don't look at me as a mean and evil critic (though I confess I can tend to that ~-) I only want to help you and I want to see more of your stories. The Pratchett style is great and you should continue to write and learn from reviews.

Then you can master it.

HAHAHA! (Hysterical laughter; Not evil) You've got to write more like this!

*Falls off her chair laughing* I loved it! thats just... there are no words to describe the funny!

Aaaah ... fate is so ... sweet? I like happy endings! Macavity is a v good actor ... this is a cat of many talents! This was so sweet and so funny! I loved it.

LMAO! *was picturing her friend, Chicomecohuatl/Crystallia as Fate... and Cyrstallia's brother as Mathematics* That was great! I loved it!

This is strange, but funny.

That was sooo cute! And funny!

Dude, I think Fate's little brother Mathematics left his gym bag in my geometry classroom...eugh .

ROTFLMAO! That was inSANE! " Fate is a hopeless romantic," HAHAHA! Yeah, I liked it. What can I say? I'll have another challenge for you soon. _

Congratulations on yet another successful, wonderful, immpecable (heh heh got my thesaurus out today) story. I can never understand how you can make your story seem so... (meh.. so much for that thesaurus) I noe! So Adult like written with humour sprouting everywhere...and of course I've started babbling yet again... so I leave you with the begging er beg... to continue writing!