| Reviews for The Man Who Was Unstoppable |
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Leon R. Peterson chapter 4 . 10/24/2019 love it so far Can't wait |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/26/2018 Such a shame this story isn’t gonna be finished :( I read the prequel and man was it fantastic As much as I’d like it to continue, that possibility isn’t very reasonable Despite all of this, thank you for the great stories you had put out, they truly were great |
ekrekeler chapter 4 . 1/31/2015 Awww man! And it was just getting started up! I absolutely LOVED "The Things I Never Knew," so I was excited when I discovered a sequel after going back and reading it again. I can't help but express how much I love reading stories where Kim and Ron realize their feelings for one another. I do hope that someday you will come back to finish this. I need closure. I'm wondering who exactly this "Dr. Greene" person is and if she is aware of just what exactly she is doing. Does she plan to break up Team Possible? We might never know. Kim's and Ron's lives seem to be normal for now, if by normal you mean excruciatingly boring, dull, and uneventful. Sounds kind of like someone I know who's currently leaving a review... However, Kim and Ron seem to be haunted by someone they don't know. Or maybe they just don't remember. I mean there was a worldwide memory wipe about a year and a half ago. Of course only three people know about the memory wipe and what exactly was wiped from memory. But was Kim really seeing something? Was it a flashback? Maybe a hallucination? Any way, it's pretty creepy to see something like that out of the blue. The Krekeler |
EDD17SP chapter 4 . 9/20/2013 I suppose that considering this story hasn't been updated in 3 years, it means the tale will remain unfinished for eternity. I am rather disappointed, for I really want to know how this would turn out. |
Bjrit92 chapter 4 . 7/17/2012 I love your story. Hopefully you'll write more of it soon :) |
Valerie3 chapter 4 . 8/20/2011 I liked Wade's quip about the Queen of England. That was pretty funny. |
KageOkami-Kogo chapter 4 . 1/29/2011 Interesting so far! I'm glad you brought back Monkey Fiske :D I always liked him. Very curious to see what happens next _ |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2010 nice beginning |
Katsumara chapter 4 . 7/17/2010 Hey EE. Long time no see! Great to see you're back and sorry about your battle with writer's block. It's a battle I've been losing all my life, so I feel ya. Keep up the great work! |
CajunBear73 chapter 4 . 7/16/2010 Some wheels turning as this progresses. Ron's mom seems to be on the edge of ruining the relationship between her son and his girlfriend. That seed planted will loom large as this goes. Kim seems to have dimmed her spark a bit since the Lowardian invasion, and I hope she gets it back. And that her reason for her having that spark at all doesn't let her down, in her mind anyway. Some wicked plans from the good Doctor and Fist seem to be about to intrude on the world and some others also appear to be plotting things against Kim and Ron too. Now to England. CB73 |
LoPe21 chapter 4 . 7/16/2010 it was kind of dry but i guessed this was a sort of interlude chapter. Im not particularly fond of the whole stranger watching the heroes literary staple but this looks like its going to be interesting. keep up the good work. |
eckles chapter 3 . 1/26/2010 I have just caught up with this story and I must say congratulations for dealing with the aftermath of the Alien Invasion, only a handful of authors chose to 'go there'. What intrigued me and pleased me was that at the end of the last story (Pt 1) the bad guy zapped the global population into forgeting that his efforts towards destroying the world never happened. Leaving poor Kim and Ron only having maybe a week or so of romantic bliss until they were pulled upart. Fortunately they are now back together as per the canon but there appears to be some minor rifts forming within the dynamic duo. Speaking from experience, my girlfriend is Jewish and I am ... well ... not. I know all about the cliche of the mother and father wanting their child to date within the scope of thier 'kind'. The trouble is that things become cliche for a reason, though to the best of my knowledge I don't think my gf has ever had the 'Banana Talk', but I know for a fact she has already had the 'and what will your children's faith be?' It is daunting and an eye opening aspect of wanting to be with someone of a different faith, because every child wants to have their parent's proud of the person they have set their heart upon. Ron will be riding a rollar-coaster from Hell. And as for Kimmy? Well she may be able to slide Ron's accomplishment's of being her 'Protector' to the side of 'the good'. The trouble is that Kim is a 'Alpha Female' or a 'Class A Personality', she can't be anyones, sorry to use this word again, second Banana. She may support the idea now, but I think deep down the discovery that Ron has now well and truly surpassed her will slowly start to naw on her. She might be a Hero, but Ron is a SUPER-Hero, with power's and everything. With Ron feeling the pressure from his parental Unit's believing that: 'Kim is a nice girl to distract yourself with and get the finer points of do's and don'ts of Dating sorted, but she is not the 'kind' of girl they want to have linked to thier name.' And then there is Kim thinking that she might now be holding Ron back in the 'Super' department. Would love to hear from you. W |
princessvmlg chapter 3 . 1/25/2010 I've been waiting so long for another chapter, but time was worth it. Love this chapter. Wonder what was what Kim saw. Ron's mother talk. Really liked the chapter. Looking forward for next one. |
Katsumara chapter 3 . 1/25/2010 Great chapter here, EE. Loving it so far. The bit with Kim and the visage of the face in the mirror was super creepy. I'm thinking of who it could be, but obviously Kim doesn't know. As far as Ron's mom, I can see you're taking the route of Ron's mom as a sort of colder mom. Some have taken liberties in doing so with that, while others have made her a tad nicer than the show. The words she spoke could be true, but I've got faith that Kim isn't rotten to the core. She's got her rock in Ron Stoppable and won't let go. Just hope Ron's insecurities won't get the best of him. Keep up the fine work, buddy. :D Good luck with school! |
loveandwar007 chapter 3 . 1/25/2010 Well, it looks like Ron's mother has finally had her two cents about her son's and Kim's relationship. Wonder how this will come back to haunt him. And speaking of haunting, this mysterious terrifying man seems to be preying on Kim as well. Cap it off with Monkeyfist's revitalization and you've got a world of trouble for Team Possible. Can't wait to see where it goes! |