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takers dark lover chapter 5 . 9/30/2010 Ok Hunter is going to kill Paul for what he is doing to Matt. And what is the deal with Shawn why was he acting like that? Hunter has to find Matt quick and get him away from Paul. Matt should be with Hunter. Hope to see an update soon. I know it took me forever to catch up and I'm sorry about that. |
wrestlefan4 chapter 5 . 8/18/2010 Great chapter DK. Love it still! I really do, good job. Lolz at Paul in his ring gear and plumed hat. That's a really good/weird mental image to entertain me at the moment xD *hugs* |
Jade chapter 5 . 8/17/2010 Your Storys are the best. |
Ambrosealley88 chapter 5 . 8/17/2010 Great chapter! |
Esha Napoleon chapter 5 . 8/17/2010 LOVE IT! |
jade chapter 4 . 3/30/2010 good Story! More please. |
takers dark lover chapter 4 . 3/6/2010 Matty should have stayed in his room. I hope Hunter can do something quick before it's to late. Poor Matty! |
wrestlefan4 chapter 4 . 3/2/2010 Good chapter ;) So I'm just curious now, Paul owns Chris too doesn't he? How did he come to own Chris? I'm sorry if I missed this somewhere before...I'm also really tired right now. Poor Matty, he never seems to have much of a choice in things lol. I hope Chris is there to do more good than harm. Oh, and I'm not sleepy enough to forget to add: Chris and jump one me after yelling "surprise" anytime. Hell, he can just jump on me for that matter. Lolz! Great job! |
Ambrosealley88 chapter 4 . 3/2/2010 Oh, I wonder what Hunter is planning. Whatever it is, I hope he goes through with it soon. Matt needs saving. |
WraithRaider chapter 4 . 3/2/2010 Poor Matt! What a predicament. I hope Paul doesn't rough him up too much. And Hunter as the white knight, coming to save Matt? I love it, although Hunter is probably more of a black knight considering the things he wants to do to Matt. Can't wait for the update! |
Esha Napoleon chapter 4 . 3/2/2010 LOVE IT! |
slashburd chapter 4 . 3/2/2010 Loving ch4 - Paul is just such an amazing and sinister character. He's every bit the serious low-down pimp. Having seen Jerishow's interactions in kayfabe its easy to imagine that the roles are reversed and he'd have Chris as his street-level snitch and enforcer. Poor Matty, he is indeed that chick from the horror films that runs down the dark alley instead of the direction where the cop car is! I'll be interested to see what has been planned for him and what Hunter's plans are to see that it doesn't happen. Another fab ch as always, the storytelling is briliant! |
Sinfully Sined chapter 4 . 3/1/2010 *Sin creeps up behind paul with a Rocket D**do as she motions for Taker and Kane to knock him on his face. After they have them down she pulls his panst down and says. "Hope you don't mind but I forgot the lube." Before she shoves it up his a**. "Now if you ever touch my matty again we are going to have a big problem. Do you understand?" Then all three walk away without looking back* Let's hope that teaches the man not to mess with my Matty at the moment only my Hunter and sometimes My Kane can do that. I swear you all have corrupted my muses. Now my girls feel left out. I really love this story. Now what is this about a strike and why haven't I heard of it? Luv Sin! |
slashburd chapter 3 . 2/16/2010 You know I was always going to love this ;) My favorite part had to be the cutting of the collar. What it symbolises is incredibly powerful even thought it might seem like a small thing to do and is worked so simply and effectively into the story. Matt's inner struggle is what is so fascinating about this fic, the fight in him seems to be slowly subsiding. Hunter's self assuredness is really well put across as he's not trying to get Matt to do anything other than what he wants to do. I don't imagine Paul is out of the picture for long but I don't fancy his chances up against Hunter here either. You know I can't wait for more of this great fic and well researched pairing ;) |
Ambrosealley88 chapter 3 . 2/15/2010 Wow. I...I think wow sums up my feelings for this chapter quite nicely. |