she's behaving like a teenager, so overdramatic

i wish her the best

and good story by the way

good luck on finnishing it if you are

I will sincerely pray for her...I send her blessings and hope

this is a great story! but Christopher Marlowe is British not American BTW!

I sincerely hope that you get better hun i really do

oh my god ! i'm so sorry i hope she gets better :'( her stories are really great!

Hey, please tell Alli that I wish her best of luck and that I wish her that she gets well soon - not for the story, but for herself!

My thoughts are with her!

xo from Germany

Please send Alli all my best wishes and thoughts for her recovery. She shouldn't apologize at all. I just want her to feel better, get better, recover and be happy. Much love and support from me to her.

I am so sorry. I hope you'll get better, Allie! It's a sin to apologize for such thing - I lost my grandmother to the cancer, so I know how it feels to live with it, even though it wasn't myself who suffered from the illness.

I'm not religious, but I will pray for you.

Luvs -

Alice.

Is it possible that Jasper's dad is one of the men who killed Alice's parents?

When jasper's parents panicked when Alice said she was a Brandon, I thought it's because The Whitlocks got the money from the Brandon's fortune... That idea popped into my head because it reminded me of a soap opera that I watched...Update soon :)

love it love it cant wait for update

signed kirstyboppin
x0x

i feel the love...love how its going so far!

Hey there!

This is yet another great chapter. Honestly. You should know that I rarely review on stories, and this is not the first time I reviewed on yours, so if I were you, I'd be proud. :D

I can't wait to see what's up with Jasper's father. I bet he knew Alice's parents from somewhere.

Oh, and that picture of Jasper as a five year old with the guitar... It's the cutest thing ever. Ok, there isn't actually a real picture, but I can totally imagine it (L). And I'd love to see Jasper playing to Alice. I always had a thing for guitarist, it's just so, so hot. And it's even better when he sings...

Ok, I'm rambling, whatever...

So, all I wanted to tell you is that I love this story and I'm looking for an update.

Kathy

I just read your story and I think it's really good! Don't stop writing it!

Please update soon

ACndCA