Well you know what I think :)

But again, I just love how this chapter goes from one extreme to the other and I really think It helps put the reader in Syl's shoes. All the emotions she went through.. I definitely felt the same.

As Alistair once said...

"Creepy.."

But GOOD creepy! LOL

It's very nice and interesting, i've loved reading it. Keep it up.

Every time I read this - chills and shivers, my dear. Well done.

Completely engaging story; still really like the concept behind the story. Hope you find a beta.

Chapters 1 - 11: I am so enjoying this story. Marvelous and imaginative. I need to take a break, though, as my eyes are getting bleary. Well written with few typos/grammatical errors. Really, really enjoying this!

Thank the MAKER you are continuing this! I was wondering where you went :) Good luck in finding a beta! Ill send you a pm in a bit

Please, continue this story. I really like the original ideas here. Very well written, thank you so much.

I am so loving this story and anxious to see what happens next. I hope that you are able to continue it.

This is an amazing story, i really loved reading it. Can't wait to see where this is going. Thank you

"Before he could answer, the door opened and in stepped Sadbh. Her bow was drawn, and she looked between the two women on the bed and the naked man in the corner. Her eyebrow arched inquisitively at the scene. Alistair just shook his head, barreling past her.

"Don't ask. You don't want to know.""

LO-freaking-L.

Hahaha seriously only Alistair...

Great chapter! I love getting insight into characters its awesome :)

I'm glad you are planning to keep this going. Real life takes over sometimes but don't forget about this wicked story!

Until next time!

I just sat and read this whole thing in one sitting and..

I want more! This is such a great story. Instant Fave for sure!

Please continue writing this! You write, I'll read :D

Eek! That was so bittersweet... How are you going to keep this one going? I can't wait to find out :D

what an incredible story. You are a great writer, and I really want to know what happens next.

Outstanding, this is lyrical and wise and the best Dragon Age Fan Fic intro that I have read. I'm hoping you have an original novel soon because this is wonderful.

Wow so I guess Zev knows her just as well as she knows him :P

Update soon please!