holy batman this was so freaking awesome and funny too

Awesome one-shot! :D

Your story was recd to me and it was very worth the reading;-)

that was soo much fun to read lol

amazing! I loved every part of this story :D

Well Keisha, I would definitely have to say...I Love Your Story.

It is so true how things' are in high school. Rumor upon rumor...but, for him to cover his own ass...loved it...

Now, to come out with a surprise like he was packing... Thank God...

Now, I must say...I truly think this could develop into more than just a o/s...sounds like the starts of a damn good story...hummmmmmm.

Anyway, thank you for sharing your story with me...it was Definitely a pleasure to read...

Jamie

Hi there,

I love the way you put the details in this one-shot, and I also love Edward and Bella and the gang in high school...The banters, the innuendos, I liked them all. I'll ready your other stories later...

I loved this story, great one shot.

soooooooooooooo good .. thanks :)

That was dirty! Loved it.

OMG! Love it!

I freakin loved your one shot, and I was definitely not ready for it to be over :)

That was wonderful! I loved Edward asking her if she had a problem dating little dick boy!

Xx

Autumn

I do love the premise of the story and the power outtage and flooding was genius adding that in as well.

Definitely a good story.

Will rec soon.

lol, whoa! speechless!Beautifully written!Painted a very...interesting...vision!