oh WOW ... he kept trying, over and over and over, even when it did no good ... Lucifer was true to his word. He said he never lied ...

Geezus! This hits where it hurts, and is a great wake up call for a Dean. Brilliantly done. I loved it. xo

Great job! You're writing style is fantastic, very easy to read

Nice story :)

Thanks !

I like this idea very much, good job.

Great story, very well done. Because really,knowing that Lucifer was going to camp out in your body would totally freak your ass out. I would want to vacate the premises as well.

read it and it isn't crap ,really like sad and dean must really feel bad for poor sam.

What a way to test a theory.

I love stories written under the flash of inspiration. This certainly was! Wonderfully emotional. I felt so badly for Sam. I often wondered if he really did try to commit suicide-I think I would, especially after Dean told him he couldn't come back (The End). At this point in the series, it seems their relationship is so shredded, so battered that they'll never be brothers again. :(

Dear Neurotic Author,

I love your notes. They make me smile.

Lily

P.S. Your stories are good too :-)

This is really, really depressing. I still like it. Your description of the invisible wall between them is a nice touch.

Hope you enjoyed your birthday present to yourself as much as I did! Not plotless, not badly written...excellent characterisation. Thanks for sharing...

AH! Sammy! *sobs*

Not surprised, though. That's just how Sam's mind works...doing research, testing theories. And this? "Apologizing for apologizing about something he shouldn't be apologizing for." - Wow. That is SO Sam!

Loved how Dean discovered the various scars and his reaction to them - very true to character throughout...as always!

loved it!

:'-(

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