Whaaaa? Argh Nooo! Please please please tell me there is going to be more! I am captivated and likely to cry if you say you've given this story up! It's so good!

I'm really enjoying this story. You've set up compelling characters and a good pace. I particularly like your attention to description of character interactions with their surroundings and animals. And the cultural references. For feedback, I recommend a second read through to edit out repetition in your dialog. I notice you tend to re-explain character motivation when it is already apparent in their speech. I also think some of the monologues are a little long, although you have gotten better about it through the length of the story. I'm curious about what will happen w the child and where the group will travel next. Keep it up! Happy writing! :)

Awesome original story! Please continue this!

Loving this story. Update soon please.

*g* poor Zevran - always so cold weather. ;) very nice dialogue in the kitchen - liked it. :)

Interesting scenario with the brothel - Aithnes anger and Leliana's attempt to be diplomatic - all in character and well comprehensible.

And - oh dear! What a mistake to split the group - but how should they know... :( Wynne! oh no! :( Morrigan and Shayle - I hope Anders will return quickly. And Mei taken away - what a cliffhanger! I hope, muse and time are nice to you and to your readers. :)

oh no!

great update!

OH WOW!Things are getting even more exciting! Love Zev's humor. I had to get tissues for Wynne, and poor Shayle and Morri. I am on the edge of my seat for Mei! Great job! Well worth the wait sweetie! Do stop feeling bad about not posting as often, I for one LOVE this story and I am perfectly willing to wait.

Wow what a cliffhanger! I can't wait for the next installment.

OMG! YOU NEED TO UPDATE! I first read this back when it was fairly new, and I am so glad that I remembered what it was called _ Update as soon as you are able please! :D

It's so great to see everyone again, even in terribly tense times. And the child was beautifully described - it felt very natural. I never would have considered the taint affecting Morrigan, what a crazy/sad twist. I hope your muse returns, I look forward to reading more :)

Beautifully done. You really got across Zev's conflicted feelings so well.

I am in love with this chapter! So much growth and angst at the same time. I can definitely picture Zevran pulling back when Alistair is in the picture again. The awkwardness/hardness of everyone was delicious!

Love this chapter! And I really enjoyed how you described the battle with the rogues - it was perfect. I have to hurry up and get reading I think :)

story 10 awesomeness. i look forward to more.