Wow just wow! Honestly I didn't think I was going to like this read very well... boy did you fool me lol.
This was very well written and thank you. I enjoyed reading it very much :)

Surprisingly hot and sweet! I've never been a big Sten fan, but you've made me see him in a different light here.

This was,wow...Uhm,hot xD unexpectedly! I love the stenmiester though :') I always used to call him that,andraste knows why xD seriously though I loved it :D

Interesting pairing. The Qunari have always been fascinating, and they were explored more with DAII, and it leaves me craving for more. Glad you wrote this pairing.

BVR

I absolutely LOVE this fick! This is exactlly how I would imagine Sten would behave (from the beginning to the end of the story lol) if he would fall in love with a woman (non-qunari anyway :] )

Thank you for feeding my inner fangirl! I just love me some Sten ;)

No mann, you got it all wrong. Sten is a hardcore BDSM man fer sure.

Other than that it was pretty good.

Amazing. Perfect. Masterpiece.

I swear I heard music when they kissed.

Bravo.

Man, it was pretty god until you mentioned Sten 'gasping'. Dammit, Sten does not gasp! I cannot stress this enough to all the Sten loving Fanfictions. Sten flinching and gasping should never happen. Other than that, your ff was nice. 7/10

I liked it. It can be hard to imagine Sten with emotions or giving in to physical desire, but it is a wicked pleasure to read of it.

One day, I'm going to delve into the whole "biting through wood and metal" conversation in a ficlet...maybe.

Anyway, Sten 3. I'm so glad to see someone writing about him, as I think he is a really great character. :D

Your Sten is way too romantic, I think. I just cannot imagine him saying "It was not my sword that completed me that day, kadan...it was you." For me it's quite ooc.

Besides, somewhere you mentioned the Warden screaming his name - the only problem is, he never revealed it ("Sten" is a shortened form of his rank).

I liked the description of the battle, though, as well as of the act itself (but this one was much too short - wouldn't you be disappointed if your man started and finished so quickly? :p).

Generally: good, but I liked your previous Sten/Warden fic better (hot!). Maybe you'd write Sten/Morrigan fic some day? :)

I must say I am completely in love with this couple, and you do a fine job of showing it here. Well done.

Lovely to see a PC/Sten story. Very sweet. I'd love to know what the others thought of their relationship.