Ohh, what an interesting story! I like your writing style very much, I hope you will continue this!

This story gives me joy, but please please update . I've gotten to attached to be left alone now. Have a special day.

ejnriqoeurnviqebvqeuir UPDATE PLEASE. This is epic T_T

Oh Em Ef Gee! *squeals* Emil DOES have a man crush! And I love you for saying that the game needs more Emil x Richter scenes! I deffos agree! I should write them a letter suggesting that the next Tales game should have some side game or scenes specifically for Emil x Richter fans! XD *hugs you* And I loved this fic! [it made me jizz my pants jkjkjk 8D]

I'm 12 and I was like, Gawd, I freaking love this! I love how you match the characters with the same pesonality in the game, I like Richter/Emil thing, that's why I clicked this link, though I realy hope Ratty and would tell Emil he loves him in a lover way, so it would b Ratty VS Ricky, the winner gets Emil3. But please keep on going!

i must read more, i love this story, you must write more!
... please

Yeah,the chapter was a bit rushed and it is true that Ratatosk is 'MOTHERFUU—blep—' OOC. ;) Still you got me hooked!I want Emil/Richter love!And it took you a month to make this chapter!. Still at least ur it;your fans are waiting to be surprised!
~iv

I think there may be some typos, like missing words, in here because some parts were kinda confusing to figure out what you were trying to say.

But overall, very nice chapter, love the description as usual. :3

I can't say I mind all the Ratatosk/Emil stuff, though I do look forwards to the Richter/Emil stuff. Though I feel REALLY bad for poor Ratatosk.

...Does Emil realize just how accurate his joke might be? I seriously think Ratatosk would destroy a city or two if Emil left him completely. Does Emil realize that Ratatosk really isn't joking or exaggerating about Emil being the only reason he hasn't killed tons of people yet? Forgetting what happened in the white space might not be a good idea. :

I wanna know more about that red thing! XD
This was just a fun chapter to read! :D I can't wait for the next update! ..

Ugh! *slaps my forehead* Im so sorry about what happened with your computer!I was in a rush last time and didn't read the last couple paragraphs and author's note!Happy late birthday tho,I hope it was wonderful!

Hehe I lurve the progress in the story!Eheh,if you were dead,I would kill you!Hehe just kiddin' I really liked the Ratatosk scene where he just seems murderous.I know that's sounds odd coming from a girl but it just intrigues me and its just so suspenseful! I screamed out 'YES!' when that b*tch Emil used to like got beat up by Ratatosk!Nobody messes with Emil!

I really like how you blend Emil/Ratatosk while (trying

to)focus on Emil/Richter.I really hope there are some major Emil/Richter scenes coming up.I'm ready for some action,romance,drama,and perhaps lemon-y scenes!*pumps fist into air* Update soon!

~iv

I was like "He** yeah!" when you said 'Finally we find our most sexiest/cutest pair in teh cave. Oh noes. SMEX.' richter and Emil are the cutest couple in mankind(well to me) And of course I was dissapointed when you said 'just kidding.' Anyway on to the story!:

The middle was pretty good.I had a bit confusion here and there but it's all good.I just need to read chapter 4 and my questions will be answered. Great job!

~iv

Ugh i was so ticked off that there wasn't alot of stories on Emil and Richter! Hehehe I can't wait to read the other chapters with the sidequests;your wonderful writing is making me hungrier every time i read another chapter.(Eheh *sweatdrop* That was an awkward comment.)

The story had really good flow and details!You described Emil's sadness really well and as you follow the original storyline,you are also putting in the creativity of really good!You go!

~iv

No it isn't sloppy,this was a pretty good start! Hehe I love EmilxRichter fic-cys too! I really liked your details and how you didnt make ANY of the characters OOC. This was really fictabulous(srry for the chessyness)!i can"t wait to read ur other stories!

~iv

Damn, I'm sure I heard Ratatosk's heart shatter! Poor guy XD

But Richter isn't Emil's wife (yet), so he's not entirely breaking his promise (yet).

Anyway, I'm very impatient to see when the real Richter x Emil love will start. Though I didn't mind the Ratatosk x Emil love either: it spices things up!

UPDATE SOON!

RATATOSK!

Seriously, it's just way too sad, his relationship with Richter. Loving their relatiohship, of course...but it IS very sad. Especially since I'm ALSO a RataEmil fan. Hur hur.

I'm glad you're not dead, though...

Oh, and I'm glad that betch went through life, well, scarred. Muahaha. SHE DESERVED IT. And Ratatosk is such a badass...

Fluffy and sad and wonderful...as usual...(sniff) Oh well, at least we'll get to some Richter and Emil soon, right? RIGHT?

Awesome chapter! Aww, Ratatosk... he cares so much. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. Is he gonna beat Richter up or let Emil go? Or go with them? The flashback was very good, great job.

I know what you mean about being so lazy. I'm horrible about that. Ganbatte (do your best)! I hope you'll finish this and not give up on it!