Reviews for Alternate Universe
Guest chapter 1 . 5/16
Its okay i just didnt like the plot and how long it was and ther was no much going on but its very cute
Solene chapter 51 . 5/23/2019
Wow, I’m drinking your words! Absolutely love your stories! I know you’ve published them a long time ago but please make some more haha.
Amazing writing, thank you!
HonestPassion13 chapter 24 . 3/30/2019
Wow! I know this came out before the Ruby circle, however, I just realized that this would make Hope and Dimitri cousinswho likely had sex! Euw! LOL there are so many horrifying possibilities here!
I have a fic that I have been working on for a while on Archive of Our Ownsort of an alternate ending to Shadow Kiss. Would you mind if I Incorporated Hope into my story?
HonestPassion13 chapter 13 . 3/29/2019
I actually really like this other storyline. I think it also could've been great
Guest chapter 51 . 8/9/2018
Um I need to know if this baby came out human? I love this! I have not other questions other then if this baby came out human?! I really want it to be dampire...
Guest chapter 7 . 8/7/2018
Literally you took the names from so many of my favorite books, tv shows, and movies that I'm going to scream! Literally in love rn!
Guest chapter 4 . 8/7/2018
"Milaya moya" does not only mean "my sweet". It is just an endearment. It does not have an exact English translation...I wish people would do their freaking research rather then just using google translate!
*sigh*
he-is-we chapter 27 . 8/8/2018
Is mason gay? I keep getting a gay/bi-sexual vibe from him and I need to know if he's gay or not...I know I should keep reading and I will but I'm to inpatient...
Mrs. S Mikaelson chapter 51 . 4/15/2018
This such a good story. You did an awesome job.
Guest chapter 51 . 2/26/2018
I loved this story! There were some really great lines in at and a very interesting plot. I haven't seen a story like it either. I like how Rose actually harnessed the darkness as a weapon and I felt the characterization was pretty spot on, even Dimitri whom as you pointed out would have been different due to different life experiences.
I really like the ending and that you addressed the issue of Moroi needing dhampir but being unwilling to treat them that way. I also enjoy considering the ramifications of minor changes (obviously not the age difference, but there were a lot of far-reaching minor changes in this story).
There were a few consistency issues, like I wasn't always sure whether you had them on a day or night schedule because you'd say they got up in the am, but then for the shopping trip they left pm, but they would have had to go while stores were open. Just something to keep in mind, always make sure timelines ect are consistent. Maybe you're perfect at it now as this story is pretty old ;)
Anyway, thank you for sharing your creative idea!
greendestiny1523 chapter 5 . 2/23/2018
I really enjoy this story so far and honestly I'm glad their age difference is less in this story. I do find it odd both that Christian is younger (and Dimitri's best friend) and that Rose thinks Lissa getting with Christian is ok but not her and Dimitri. Aside from the mentoring it's the same situation, student/teacher, couple year age difference.
I loved the mysteries reference to Natalie! I heard it in her voice.
I'm interested to see how a lot of things will play out in this story and how much the adjusted time line has affected Rose and Lissa's lives and development.
Valya 001 chapter 51 . 10/20/2017
this was a lovely story...I loved it
baroness vixen chapter 51 . 7/19/2017
omg my favourite story ever!
debpreato chapter 51 . 6/27/2017
This is one of the most exceptionally beautiful stories on fanfiction. I absolutely loved it
roguewords chapter 51 . 6/24/2017
Great job!
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