This was one of the best plots i have ever read. I really loved it. Especially the ending! I also loved the pairings yhe twists and of course the wedding! Hahaha. The characters were spot on. The only think that i didnt like is that at the end poor prussia hadnt found someone for him!

Well that was fast. I felt the meeting between Romano and Feliciano was too rushed but other than that interesting plotline! Now preparing for the angst

This was so fun to read!

Gaaaaahhhhh author why did this happen! Just as I was about to go to sleep I discovered this gem here..! This first chapter was so interesting that it's with deep pain I leave the rest of the reading until tomorrow.

Great job! ;)

It's been awhile since I found a story so suspenseful that I refused to put down the book for everything until I knew what happened so THANKYOU for that

*dramatic voice* Will the Varga brothers ever get their happily ever after? Will Ledell finally be able to let go of her children? Will Arthur and Alfred finally confess their undying love for one another? Will Gilbert ever get a partner? All these questions and more will be answered in the next chapter of...

Powdered Sugar
*and scene*

...well dang...

Great reasoning Gil...

There is no way in any of the nine realms this could end well.

I always think my writing is cliche, too, but if we're writing the same kind of cliche then I'm a better writer than I thought. Ya dun good.

Yayz for the classic eyecatch!

Having your insides plunged into a vat of walnut gelato... Oh, Feli, sweetie, you are one adorable little weirdo.

I'm loving the brotherly feels with Feli and Lovi, they're all like, trusting each other and stuff.
...Yes.

if i wasn't flat-out broke because i really like candy (and chips... and cookies... and snack foods in general... so sue me. wait, actaully don't, as said, i couldn't afford it) i'd give you 50 bucks for this. ie it's a good story :)

Aww, Feli likes Luddy Maybe they can get together it West stops showing all the emotion of a granite slab (kesesese)