NO!

You haven't updated in 3 years... I just arrived at this moment and you haven't updated. I could die. I want this to live, LIVE! But the author ... oh well. It was fun while it lasted. I laughed a lot, i felt mortified for Wally a lot. I covered my face and cried "WHY!? Wally, WHY?" A couple of times. It was a fun ride while it lasted. Thanks.

This is great!

Wow ... By now I'm not so much late reviewing this one as I am early for the next, but whatever. Sorry.

Anyhow, the review ...

Since this is short, I don't have a heck of a lot to say ... But as usual, I love Flash's way of talking and weird berserk buttons ... And especially enjoyed Batman and Nightwing's conversation at the beginning.

"Instead, he looked again through (h)is macros"

"(seeing the last thing he wanted was more corrosive spat in his

direction.)" This sounds sort of awkward. Partly it might sound better as "seeing as ..." and also I don't think corrosive is a noun. Corrosion, maybe, or corrosive words or ... something?

Thanks for the update,

Ashe

This story is just too wonderful. You've got me completely hooked and I am pleased to say I have finally read up to the latest chapter! I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this and have found myself laughing so much throughout (though I have to admit Wally's letter nearly bought tears to my eyes!). Wally West is one of my all time favourite DC characters and at the moment probably my favourite fictional character altogether, though I am also a Bat fan.

Now I must be off to read other stories of yours...

Sincerely hope you update this soon!

LightningSammie ~

You are an exceptional writer! I aspire to be as good as yourself one day. I am thoroughly enjoying reading this, the humour in it is fantastic!

Ah, duckies. I got two of my kidlets some from Michael's. One was metallic red and one was metallic green. Verrrrry blingy. *mumbles about Flash Ducky-maybe stealing metallic red one and adding lightning bolt*

Woot great job! I love the adventures of Flash ducky, they're so entertaining. Hmmm idea for you, maybe Wally could use his power to lend speed to his duck and like make it so fast it cuts the other down in its wake...or something like that _. Anyway good chapter and I look forward to any others of any story you choose to post cause so far you are my favorite Justice League author on this whole site! X3

-Wally

_ I'm glad that Wally can actually let some things not slide off his back. Everyone has their limit for just letting things by. Keep up the good work, dark

"Oh, f*ck". Yeah, Bats, I'd say that describes the situation perfectly. lol

hehehe nice one. Honestly Bruce just let Wally have the toy! He's like the richest man in Gotham he could buy a rubber duck factory if he wanted! Great job on this one, I can't wait for the next chapter and the fate of Flash ducky!

-Wally-

“Alfred raised both (h)is right eyebrow ..."

“its wide width providing ...” This isn’t a big thing, but “wide width” sounds kind of redundant. It makes sense,it just sounds weird. Unfortunately the only alternative I can think of is something like “great width” or even just “width,” but like I said, it’s not a big thing and probably only sounds weird from my point of view.

“ey(e)ing the eerie stillness ...”

"That's the way. Sure, you're just a rookie now, but just you wait, [insert a Rocky Balboa's coach pep talk here.](“)”—LOL.

"Contestants please make there way to the check point for registration of your

chosen event.”—Wrong “their.” Also, may sound better if you say “Contestants, please make your way to the checkpoint for registration in your chosen event,” since it’s the contestants being talked to. Alternately “Will contestants please make their way ...”

“Militia Aficionado Society's Silicon Aquatic Combat Race Extravaganza”—great.

“What there was (was) a river course devised by Mad Max ...”

“and what looked like a(-n) tin Godzilla ...”

“I don't think we(‘)re enrolled in The Waddler's Duck Pond Race anymore."—LOL.

Love Wally’s song while he’s standing in line. Heh.

Yeah ... This is what you get when you don’t read the fine print, Wally. Although something like this probably wasn’t in fine print, but whatever. In any case, it’s probably not wise to think of what Batman will do to him if Flash Ducky doesn’t come out on top.

As to Flash Ducky’s OC status, I wouldn’t say he’s exactly an OC. I’d go more along the lines of running gag, since he isn’t actually animate and I’m not sure you could strictly consider him a character. Not that it matters; OC or not, he’s a riot.

Batman just isn’t getting the picture, is he? Well, I guess that’s a little harsh. I think he’s getting it, just has no idea what to do about it. I just hope he doesn’t end up making Wally feel any worse. (Perhaps a big part of that will depend on the outcome of the Duck Race of Death, though.)

Speaking of that, I didn’t see the rubber ducky race coming in the first place. For the first part of the chapter I thought it was a real race and was trying to fathom how it was that Wally’s entering it would be fair. Nice job keeping me guessing, as usual.

MANY THANKS FOR THE UPDATE! :)

ASHE

Snerk. Nightwing, you sure you want to stop Bruce from getting his limited-edition ducky away from certain death? Keep up the good work, dark

I'm impressed very much by Alfred, but sighing over Wally. :) :(

I can imagine how difficult it will be to tell Wally any other way than his worst imagined nightmares on what Bruce wants to say. (blah, what a sentence...) I wouldn't be surprised if it ended up being up to Batman to either track Wally down at home or pin him down up in the watchtower to speak to him... neither bode well for the speedster's nerves. Keep up the good work, dark

Awwww you HAVE to have Bruce go chase him down now. Poor Wally. Let's hope Bats finds him before the kid gets himself in trouble