This was pretty good, but I have a question. What did Brock give Dawn for Christmas?

Try a thanksgiving 1. I haven't read 1 of those yet!

You didn't put any punctuation marks at the end of your sentences, but otherwise really good story.

i simply luv it. ;)

Nice

a great story! Advanceshipping rules!

awesome story! i cant wait for more! by the way,where you were writing what each of them got,when it was Brock's turn to give Dawn something,it was written "Brock got."

aw...

absolutely ADORABLE! 3

beautifully written. keep up the great work.

nice story. short and sweet.

Good story

This story was very good.

It was good that Ash got May something good for christmas.

It was good that Ash and May got together with each other.

Keep up the good work.

That was cute! (Hold on! Did I say 'cute'? Since when do I say that things are cute?)

Anyway, awesome story!

Another good story Sheltie I cna't wait to see your next advanceshipping story.

Wow... I liked this although I have to wonder if the mistletoe was there earlier...Brock did disapear... - Anyways yeah it was great and I liked it...Man, I'm tired...

Oh and Farla, if one was to follow your logic about naming the Pokemon then if a trainer were to opt not to name a Pokemon then the name of the species would in a sense become it's name. Following that respect I am curently looking at the back of Platinum's case and I quote: Catch, train, and battle your favorite Pokemon and discover ancient, mythical Pokemon.

Sentences always end in periods, not just occasionally.

You wouldn't capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn't capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you're using it as the pokemon's name, ie, Ash's pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it's a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you're thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer.

Dialogue is written as "Hello," he said or "Hello!" he said, never "Hello." He said or "Hello." he said or "Hello," He said or "Hello" he said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn't contain a speech verb, in which case it's written as "Hello." He grinned, never "Hello," he grinned or "Hello," He grinned. Note that something isn't a speech verb just because it's a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category.

Furthermore, if you're breaking up two complete sentences it's "Hi," he said. "This is it." not "Hi," he said, "this is it." or "Hi," he said "this is it." And if you're breaking up a sentence in the middle, it's "Hi. This," he said, "is it." And if you're breaking up a sentence in the middle, it's "Hi. This," he said, "is it." If there's no speech verb in the break, you use a dash, like "Hi. This - " He looked around. "- is it."