Hahaha that was really cute.

YOU HAVE YO MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER I DONT CARE IF ITS A ONE SHOT MAKE MORE AND DO A YAOI SCENE AND MAKE THE DA FAN GIRLS HAPPY! :D

Thhis story is sooooooo cute!
I read it and reread it so many times, I remenber every scene! Definetly the bestakuroku fanfic I ever read!

I liked the way that you captured Axel in this. I really liked the way you write too, so I may be checking out your other stories as well. Nice job (:

This is so cute, and kept me up far longer than I wanted to be. It's stories like this that make me dread the words one shot.

Very cute! Good job on writing this! You've just made my day! XD

Please do more ;-;

I've always heard Axel is a pedophile. I always wondered why.

I remember that I read this fic about 3 or 4 years ago! One of my favorite, definitely. Not to mention that I remember every single scene in this fic. I just love this fic so much :) And now I'm reading this again after years, I find it highly entertaining and nostalgic as well. It's a good thing that now I found and re-read this again, as now I can give a proper compliment.
I think the story is really nice, everything actually goes smoothly. I love how you portray Axel's mischievous behavior and Roxas' emo-teenager manner haha. It's really refreshing :) One of my favorite part (and the one that I clearly remember more than any other part) is when Axel showed his pyromaniac side which is really good. Even though the story is quite short, I can say that it's enough for the story-not too long and not too short. I think that's all I can tell you... maybe there's actually more than this, but I swear I can't remember what other compliments I was going to write! I hope you will read this review and realize that this fic was one of the reason I became a part in akuroku world. Have a great day! ;)

This was really sweet. I really enjoyed it.

Loved it!

:) oh my god i like freaking couldnt stop smiling through this my sister was like what the hell are you doing? haha i love it so much

Dude... I dont know how long agp you wrote this... but... I LOVED IT! Thank you. I Loved it. Thank you... It made me feel all warm inside the whole time i was reading it 3 SEQUALLLL! Plzzz Part 2! Bring it I want it!

Great story! I love kingdom hearts pairings! Axel is my favorite kingdom hearts character... A plain beautiful story :)

This is the best onehsot that i've ever read! :)
I love everything about it. 3