Very good.

umm. good story and all, but i really can't picture holmes liking anybody. or being tricked. but the last part was funny! : )

Why only three reviews? It was great - characters seemed very canon and I was riveted the whole way through. Could use a bit of editing for some typos, but apart from that it's an interesting glimpse into the what-might-have-been past )

Now I feel so bad for Holmes. Great story though, it seems like something out of one of the actual books.

This is a wonderful character development piece. Along with a nice mystery, of course. Wonderfully done. Keep writing!

very nice, just like the previous story. I love it