thanks for sharing this amazing fic! :D

That is so adorable I adore Jake and Neytiri they are just the cutest couple!
This was wonderful Jaytiri forever!

I like you take on this.

Please add more I really love it!

i like this

i loved it! i wished that was i the movie!

Good for a one shot, but I do have one gripe. Mainly that you have Neytiri making very human like references that she most likely wouldn't have gotten: "and soon he had stolen her heart from her like a practised thief in a busy market."

The thief part I bet she'd understand easily, but the market reference I think would be out of her normal comfort zone to use in a saying.

Aside from that, good story.

~ErikArden

This story is incredible. Along with "At the Break of Dawn", which it acts as a sequel to, this is such a beautiful addition to the movie, and a gem of JxN "shippery" stuff I have read so far. I like your writing style and your way of portraying Neytiri's inner feelings. I'm glad I've found your stories, as I'm having a rather difficult time orientating around this site (there had been over 500 Avatar stories already when I came here for the first time, and with no rating system, I have to pick carefully what to read). Thank you.

Absolutely incredible. I loved it!

Love this so much!

This was a nice one-shot.

I really like your Avatar-stories so far, and I hope that there are more of them to come. ;)

So. Freaking. AWSOME! I love your stories! They are amazing! I feel what they feel, see what they see! You are a spectacular author!

YES! MY THEORY WAS CORRECT! i thought that they linked their braid-thingys together for mating, cuz it seemed like a really intimate thing to do, to bond spiritually like that...

i loved it! it was so cute!

Okay I absolutely love stories involving Neytiri, Jake and jealously. This piece was superb! I only wished it was longer. )