I hate it what is wrong with you

Lmfao!

Ahahahahaha that's hilarious! :D brilliant, brilliant, brilliant :D

OMG! XD This was so damn funny! Love it:)

It made me giggle. I enjoyed it a lot.

Just saying... this isn't M rating. It's more like a T.

LMFAO "taste the rainbow bitch." had me dying. Very nice.

Alright! My favorite part was the song... and the fainting.

Taste the rainbow, bitch!

"Taste the Rainbow, bitch." is possible the best thing I have ever read in a story that made me laugh.

Cookies for you.

Lilith G. Astroll

i thought this story was hilarious and i loved it hehehe :D

While that "gay boyfriend" song was pretty hilarious, I still find the whole thing pretty homophobic (especially that one part where Hermione called them "disgusting"). Also, why the flonk is this story rated M? You should probably change the rating to T seeing how all they did was snog.

"Told you she'd buy it," Ron said once outside. "Was that a great trick or what?"

"Definitely," Harry agreed. "We're still straight though, right?"

"Oh, yeah, definitely."

Loved that!

oh my god that was hilarious... i loved the touch of "gay boyfriend" i love that song. you should write a sequel!

PLEASE TELL ME THAT YOU"RE WRITING A SEQUEL! It's absolutely hilarious! XD

I have nothing against humor, but this is not my kind of humor. I think it mostly has to do with the plot issues that I think you have.

1. There was such a sharp turn from what Harry did when got to the Three Brooms to what he ended up doing before leaving. Granted that is what some people would think what would happen if a situation became funny. But when he walked in and saw Slughorn, he was doing what he could to either keep an eye on him or have come over and join them because he saw them. I don't quite remember what he was doing from the book, but I know that up until Ron thought of kissing Harry that scene came right from the book.

2. When did Harry agree to do this? First you said Ron wasn't sure if Harry would go along with it, but at the end you had them talking like they spent the morning coming up with the act knowing that Ginny would be there.

3. It's OOC for Harry. He wouldn't have gone that far. Best mates with Ron or not. Draco was there.

4. Why did Hermione run over to Draco's side? Fine she had to leave the table when their tongues entered each others mouth, but there was a whole pub for choose a spot to run to.

5. Cameras?

This could have worked must better for me if it hasn't been made to be so loud.

At this point I'm sure you saying that I have no sense of humor. But I do, it's just dry, sarcastic and bit more, well I call it grown up, but others don't see it that way.

Could I have a go at it? I've sat here tying to think of how this could be funny, without them waving a rainbow flag around and calling Ron's sister a bitch and I got an idea.