I love it! Please update soon.

Cuando actualizas de nuevo llevas años sin hacerlo y que paso con el ataque de Paint a la Konoha

OMG! Fangirling so hard right now! I love this ending, thx for the fanfiction!

Why don't you continue this fanfic? A story about Sasuke taking Naruko hostage, and choosing between revenge and his love for her...interesting. Please, update this story.

The Japanese words in this fic are just really disconcerting and you keep mashing the dialogues of two separate characters in the same paragraph. You REALLY shouldn't do that. It's amateurish. I'm also not pleased with your attachment to Naruto's name which is predominantly a male's name. Kinda difficult to take a story seriously when the protagonist's parents gave their daughter a guy's name. It makes 'em seem like idiots. Kids gets cruelly teased for having unusual names y'know. Not cool, man.

Moreover, you've given very little characterization to the characters, making them very nondescript. You haven't described what Naru or any of the characters are wearing, tho I could forgive you for not describing EVERYONE's attires if you had just given us, the readers, a description of the main protagonists.

Sorry, but the prologue's been inadequately written.

continua lo si esta muy bueno

need marriage kids and smex scene please.

What's next?

:T i wanna see sauske babies!

OMG IS NARUTO GONNA PRANK HIM?! :D
again, i really hope u continue!

continue please

This is so good I love it please update

great fic

;-; i need more T-T

update?pleasseeee