holy shnieke! i wish you hadn't left it there! I want more!

I am so glad that this story is not dead! I first read it a couple years ago, and loved it. I was so excited to see that it was updated.
I love how well Dawn is integrated into the Animorphs storyline. I have a soft spot for crossovers where one character is placed into another story. You've managed to pull this off without making Dawn seem like she was shoehorned into the Animorphs world. I love seeing some of the unique plots that you have made in this story.
The only less than awesome things I've noticed in this story are some grammatical errors, such as the wrong pronouns being used occationally, and there is a lack of descriptions. Sometimes there are scene changes that seem abrupt and I get a little lost because I don't know exactly where the characters have gone, or what they've just done. Slow down a tiny bit and spend some more time setting up each scene. This could help make the story flow smoother.
Other than that, this is a great story and I look forward to seeing more.
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So sad to see this stopped. I was hoping to see them help with the demon side at least once. Oh well. Great story.

cool story

Fun story. Please update this!

Um... Hello? Anyone home? This story gonna get updated ever again? cuz I sure hope so.

Suddenly, from the sky . . . something fell toward me! It landed right between Ax and me. A grasshopper, three, four times our size. It looked like an elephant.

They must either be tiny wolf spiders or that's a frikin big grasshopper. Most of the wolf spiders I've seen are at least the same size as the largest grasshopper I've ever seen. And Ive seen quite a number of each.

Otherwise, great story, i hope its not a dead one.

This fic deserves so many more reviews. It's the epiphany of what a crossover like this should be. Exccellent, very well written, great details, amazing how you basically rewrote the books and so much more. I love the length, and 'specially the comedy parts. It's just amazing. You are a brilliant writer. Keep it up and please update soon!

~lazerwolf314

Hi, I love this story! It has my two favorite characters, and as a pairing, too. It's so awesome.

I love the relationship you have with Dawn and Spike, not to mention Dawn and the other Animorphs. Dawn and Ax as a pairing sounds like something I would come up with. :P

Do you still need a beta? I'd be happy to do it for you if you still need one. You can check out my fics, if you want to see how I write.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for writing this story!

I love it! More please!

Excellent chapter. I loved the parts where Spike was arguing with the Yeerk in his head.

Okay, this chapter was awesome! Haha! "He looks like a centaur shagged a smurf," haha! That is so Spike! I love this story! It's totally awesome! And I like the cute Dawn/Ax-ness that you're putting in there! Update soon! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE! It would be awesome if somebody like Clem or whatever his name is visited - or maybe you could do Lorne from Angel, eithor would fit, just someone who looks like a demon. Maybe you could have Dracula apear! You know, he was fascinated by Buffy, maybe he could turn his attention to the sister of the Slayer who also was ment to be an instrument for pure evil! Yeah, Marco would go total geek. He's a bit like Xander in that way! I'm rambling, so I'm going to stop typing (I get high off of typing, just ask my friends). Update soon please!

This is a fantastic story so far. Besides a few typos (and one factual error: the pyramids are now believed to have been built not by slave labor, but by regular folk as a form of taxation), it is very well written. Please keep it up, I would love to see how the story pans out! I also love that you are slowly having characters learn about demons and Dawn, instead of rushing. It helps to make this a good narrative. My only complaint so far is that you killed off Faith! So, the Key was just found by the Pemalites one day... further mystery about its origins. Keep up the good work!

This is a fantastic story so far. Besides a few typos (and one factual error: the pyramids are now believed to have been built not by slave labor, but by regular folk as a form of taxation), it is very well written. Please keep it up, I would love to see how the story pans out! I also love that you are slowly having characters learn about demons and Dawn, instead of rushing. It helps to make this a good narrative. My only complaint so far is that you killed off Faith! So, the Key was just found by the Pemalites one day... further mystery about its origins. Keep up the good work!

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