Had to read this over and over. Still a damn good fix and always will be.

Wow... This story is BRILLIANT! Adore the magical theory. Fantastic plot-driven deaths. And I'm so happy but still heartbroken for Snape. Dammit, I just want to give the man a hug. The smut! Ohmygod! Sooo Hot! Wonderful angst and banter. Perfectly in character. Wonderful!

Ooh, ouch! :D I love the speed of Hermione's mind, especially this comment: "I'm not defenceless! And you are not a gentleman!" Oooh, I love that burn! I worry about her sassiness sometimes getting her in trouble, or any kind of speaking back to him, but she seems to have a very sensible balance between following his directions and speaking her mind. Not excessively doormattish nor excessively defiant. Good preservation instinct on that girl! :D

Very interesting,this is the first fan fiction I read which hermione actually made out with the real voldemort, I mean with the noseless face not the cute version of Christian Coulson. Smooth writing and the exciting mysteries.

Aggiornarla é Bellissima...

I had warmth in my belly when Lucius was trying to seduce Hermione. I do hope that comes through... as well Snamione, Remione and Volmione.

Aaawwww Severus is so Awsome!

Snape is being incredibly rude to his boss.

Heh, kinda annoying that even Remus finds Hermione attractive.

Oh yay, an adventure.

fantastic.

Wow... what an awsome story. it was great to see how what seemed to be small things actually helped tiering the whole story together. You're really good at keeping a clear overview over a long and well told story. I wish, I had your skills and talent, but then again... I think I'm one of those, who just prefere to sit, relax and just enjoy reading a well story like this one. :)
Thank you for sharing the story with us.

This was lovely. I enjoyed Snape's and Hermione's friendship and I am rather sad about Lupin's fate. I felt like around the middle, things started to drag a bit but maybe it was just me being tired. I remember feeling like that in middle of Deathly Hallows. Anyway, Voldemort not wanting to be the Dark Lord anymore was very intriguing and I like that idea where he just doesn't seem to care about killing and being the most feared anymore.

I was amused by Lucius's enthusiasm to doll her up, until of course, he decided he wanted a reward *snort*

i took your advise (the one you gave me as a reply to my review on Dmitri's wedding) and i read another one of your stories.
I liked The Contract a lot, but this one is even better!
Your stories aren't just about the development of feelings between the two of them, they're full of mysteries and quests and old legends :)
You are an awesome writer and i thank you a lot because you share your fantastic gift with everyone on this website :)
Greetings from Italy,
Eliana