Everyone all together now: DAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWW!

Love this ending, cute and funny. This entire chapter was sweetly romantic. Very well done.

C'mon Prowl. Food first, then sexy fun time. Remember your training!
This was ridiculously cute and funny. On to the next chapter!

Awww

A well done Sequel! LOVED IT

That was beautiful! I loved the friendship dynamic that stayed with them the whole time, it can get lost if an author doesn't know what they're doing but I think you performed admirably!

That was absolutely amazing. The incredible love they show for each other without it being 'bond with me' love. The interfacing was hot too, but the characterizations and interactions were the real star.

Adorable.

Loved this. XD

A gem in itself, I'd say. Could feel the warmth, the finess and tenderness through the narrative, nothing crude, nothing rushed. It is quite an interesting reading experience all together. Especially liked the scenes with Jazz giving Prowl those little massages-feels so fluffy and sweet :)

*sigh* I may not be a slash fan, but I just love this pairing so much! Very cute story, I had to keep myself from squealing.:p

This was so sweet:)

OHMYGOSH that was sooooo sweet! *heart-eyes* I love the pairing, and you did one helluva kick-ass job with the two! 3 Absolutely beautiful!

I'm having a rare fan-girl moment here. They are so sweeeeeeeeeeettt...! :D Thank you for this one, you did a great job, really! :)

Love it! Also love "Loyalty"

Can I just mention how much I love this? And did I hear that English isn't your first language? You write it beautifully. Really sweet and lovely and real. I want more. But I think it ended just right.

This is just...so very lovely. I am surprised that this isn't getting more attention, though I guess with the holidays being here, there might not be as many people around. But still, it amazes me that, around here, a badly-written smut piece will get 100 raving reviews an hour and a gem like this goes relatively unnoticed. Such a crying shame. Such lack of taste we Transformers fans have. :)

Anyway, that rant aside... This, as I said, was lovely. The emotions of it, the somewhat slow pace that was so totally perfect for the "style" of the course of events, the utter gentleness between the two of them, the sheer depth of emotion that you portrayed in wonderful, atmospheric imagery, the maturity of the writing in general...Yes, just lovely. I don't keep a list of favorite stories here. I don't really know why; I just never have. Instead, I save the gems I find here and there to my hard drive to be savored over and over again, at my leisure, even if I'm in a place where I don't have an Internet connection. Trust me, this one is saved, as are more than one of your other stories. Such excellent, poignant work.

You asked for mistakes to be pointed out? Well, I didn't find many. In fact, the only one that sticks out in my head is in the first chapter. You had described one character's gaze as not "digressing" from the other's. "Digressing" might not be the best word choice. A digression is more usually a branching off of a spoken or written discussion into a related but usually irrelevant subject. So, in this case, a better word might be something like "straying." Just a suggestion, though, and not really an "error," per se. Particularly not for someone for whom English is not their mother tongue! Geez, you all impress me so very, very much.

In short, I hope to see a LOT more from you! :D Write, you! Or I shall die. OK, not really, but you know what I mean... ;)