I liked this.

This is a good story

Loved this story! Is there any more to this one? Glad they all worked everything out!

Oh good story I enjoy reading it glad to see they all worked out and Stoney still have a lot to go though.

that was a good story. Quite emotional too.

except for the fact that (in canon - on TV) Tim has not spoken to his dad for the whole of the last 6 years, its a good story.

Okay, so first I want to say sorry and I don't mean this as a flame but...

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Semi-colons are NOT commas and should not be used as such. I like a lot of your newer stories, but I can barely make myself read the older ones because of the horribly obvious misuse of semi-colons. Most of which, by the way, were not even used where even a comma should be.

Another thing I must add, is that sentances are not minivans! Please, at some point take the time to go over your older stories again and fix these issues. I really do enjoy your stories and leaving them the way they are at the moment, just doesn't do them any justice.

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Now, I know my grammar sucks, but that just makes it more sad for me that such great stories are ruined by bad grammar.
I really don't mean any offense and I apologize if this ticked you off. I just want to help.

Everytime I read this chapter, it makes me want to cry for Tim.

This is the most incredible story, and touched me so thoroughly, I was in tears! Thank you so much for writing a story which, as a McGee fan, I've always wondered about. Wonderful, wonderful job!

Liked it! I thought the story and plot was good but it ended a little too easily for me, a little too quickly. Maybe it's just me, but I just think Tim went back to NCIS a little too easily without actually solving or resolving any of the issues he had with the rest of the team. All the same, I still liked it.

awww, that was really good. i loved it. in particular i liked how you took into account and perfectly illustrated the way that fairly intelligent people (as in head smart. no offence, if it offends you, hmm) tend to over think things. :D keep up the good work. :D :D :D

OMG! I was crying at some of the parts of this story! IT'S GREAT! LOVE IT!

I enjoyed reading this story, I would love to read another Tim stories if you have any more

Just wanted to pay you a compliment and tell you that your punctuation (semicolons and commas in particulary) has gotten much better in these last few chapters. I was able to enjoy your fine story without the distraction of wanting to edit it.

Looking forward to more from you!

Good ending. Good use of Mrs V.

My apartment in D.C.'s been rented out from underneath me. I've got two weeks to vacate that. And my job at MIT's been given to someone else. A computer glitch!

This seems excessive Tim-whumping.