Wow great story! I love your story and plot. I think it has a great deal of potential. I know it is a lot to ask considering how long it's been since you updated but I am begging you to please update soon. Keep up the great work. I will continue to read and review. THANK YOU!

AWWAWAW ARE YOU FINISHING THIS

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I really want to see what you come up! I think it's believable, written well and has lots of potential so...UPDATE SOON!

nice story.

write faster i want to ko wht happends next

i love it

this makes me giddy too. this chapter was much better than all the ones previous to this; somehow i really get the sence of this story through this chapter.

update soon please. :)

Please update as soon as you can! Loved this chapter too!

Sincerly,

Gerbil123

Yay! Update soon, please!

this story is quite interesting... but honestly? Sakura would NOT get tired holding a bucket of water. She's a ninja for cry out loud. Chakra is at least half physical strength. Sakura would have a well trained body. I really don't think these little things you keep mentioning would every bother her.

I like the brownie scene!

The date should be interesting, especially Sakura's taste in guys.

The Itachi scene is not bad, but, really, the torture scene seems more for torture than for interogation.

Interesting cleaning scene- shows an attention to detail, although I completely fail to see where this story is going at this point. I've given up hope on Itachi-secretly-working-for-Konoha, unless that's revealed at the Council of Elders, but they all hate Itachi so I doubt so. :(

Well written all the same.

I really liked this chapter! I hope they figure out the reason Itachi really had to kill his clan,I hope it's burried somewhere and accidently falls infront of them all. Poor poor Itachi, sakura is acting so pushy towards him. I hope everyone gets what they want, well not Itachi because he wants death, i Hope he lived and becomes happy. Update Soon!

Sincerly,

Gerbil123

this is a great beginning to this story. i am not sure if you are aiming for romance in this, but i like the way sakura is very much indifferent, perhaps he feeling will develop later. the first two chapter were a tidbit short, but the third on was much better and flowed smoothly. the only mistake i saw was that you spelled the word "chakra" as "chakre".

please update soon. :)

Nice chapter

Is Itachi really good in this fic?(like spy and that?)

Anyway, like your writing. I think Naruto actually would be able to make Itachitalk. Now it sounds wierd though. ;p

How much of an AU is this? Is it another Itachi-was-always-bad fic, or an Itachi-supported-Konoha-and-was-dying-in-the-line-of-duty fic? If it is the latter (which is getting more common, but I haven't seen any well done ones yet, and this promises to be a well done one), is he going to be reintegrated into the line of duty? If it is, I really really really look forward to this.

If it is an Itachi-was-always-bad-fic, which the last paragraph seems to suggest (although it could be because the mission was so top secret that no one knows, and Itachi isn't sure where he is) then it looks interesting, although it would be nice to place when this is, and how far after time-skip.

Actually, rereading the last section says "memory loss" to me... common if it's near death.

I like the premise, though, because there are too many Sakura-running-off-with-Itachi fics, and this is looking to be rather interesting, especially the first chapter's conversation with Sakura. Itachi seems really IC, and I think his conversation with Sakura is wonderful.

Especially the bit about his purpose.

I like this one :)...keep it up...it looks like a serious work to me.

Anyway, I'll be waiting for you to update. Would love to read the next chapter. :)

Nice work, the chapters might have been a little bit longer, but it's great :).