Reviews for The Usurper
LonelyPanda chapter 2 . 6/15/2014
Blackmail, huh, to stoop so low... XD I'm kidding, kidding! Can I please haz the 500 word bonus?! :D
LonelyPanda chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
DUDE THIS FIC IS AMAZING! :D You're so good at writing!
CeruleanDreamCat chapter 5 . 1/7/2012
This is an awesome story, just so you know. That's why a piece of my soul died when you pulled that. (warning: guilt trip) ;)
can't log in chapter 5 . 9/17/2011
you know what? I already miss this story.

mind to update this?

hahaha !
angelwings5353 chapter 5 . 9/7/2011
Kya! Poor lil' Mikan-chan! Update soon!
kirstin chapter 5 . 5/17/2011
dude, I swear that if you ever pull a frickin stunt like that ever again I will find out where you live and come at you with pitch fork's and sword's oh and another thing; UPDATE YA LAZY BITCH!

(and yes all of this is coming from a twelve your old I apologize if your offended but this is how I am when a story i really like isn't updated oh and feel free to report me :). )

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over-shadow chapter 5 . 5/6/2011
awesome story! :D

update soon!
ChallengingStereotypes chapter 5 . 12/30/2010
This Is Awesome And I Love It!

Please Continue!

Thankyou

CrimsonxHazel
Chronos Conspiracy CK chapter 5 . 12/30/2010
Warning; This message may contaminate your eyes and also I’m a tad Narumi- ish in some parts.

Though I want to kill you because... you had me kind of crying because I felt disappointed, but above all it was a good prank. It’s a great story for commencing all these tiny individual details and I love the way you make it all tie together, but not obvious. It feels like your mixing it all down into one pile, but at the same time boiling it down to a certain degree and later sprinkling your feelings and you make it all appealing. Also, how you don’t rush and simply pace your plot into this and how it blooms beautifully. And I don’t like dishing out the same comments to others. I personally like this and all your other stories and will if I could, run alongside you in a marathon as an ex- competitor. Keep progressing because it’s calming any of us agitated and haggard- like fans who have been excited and patience as none other and have been disappointed throughout many stories. You deserve a good rest, and I hope I haven’t been a bore. And throughout this entire paragraph, I haven’t even sugarcoated at all. But actually quite selfish. Be warned however, for you will be brutally hunted down and beaten down if you cannot be trusted.

Don’t eat me for my rather ‘rude remark’?

Hope you don’t.

Like you, I like to read multiple chapters of manga. And strangely, I’ve been addicted to Gakuen Alice since the summer of 2010 and I’ve apparently changed since as of that time and more connected to manga and reading.

I’m really furious at the fact you only have this much reviews because I want you to have more. I’m rooting for you out of my many favorite authors on reaching the top three to five and even ten.

Expand beyond your imagination, though you’ve already done so. All I need to do is catch up.

[-CK
Rhien Meoita chapter 5 . 12/11/2010
Lol. I found a fellow prankster. :P I did that same thing to my readers recently. :P "I am sorry to say that I am going to be discontinuing this Fanfic because of too much going on, especially school homework!" *high five* I couldn't help myself either.

But *cheers* there's more to this story. I like this story a lot~! one of the most awesome stories in existence! I would love to have that extra to your story if you still have it~

Poor Mikan~ I hope Shiki and the other guys are still alive. I have a feeling they are. :3

But thanks for this awesome story and all of your hard work. I enjoyed reading this story tons and hope to see more of it in the near future~ Well, until next time~ best wishes always!
natsumeslover chapter 5 . 12/5/2010
I'm about to murder you indeed only now you write dis chapter!
Lydiacatfish chapter 5 . 12/5/2010
You are a HORRIBLE PERSON. I hate you. *shoots*

...To make up for this, you have to update soon. :P Or ELSE.
Melyss chapter 5 . 12/5/2010
Great story :)
cj-the-fool chapter 5 . 12/5/2010
i loved it plz update asap
Violet spirit chapter 5 . 12/5/2010
As beautifully written as ever :)! Please continue with this story x
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