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Just started reading your story this past week. I am finding it refreshing to see a change from the Golden Trio and friends to someone not talked about a lot and their side of the story. Happy i found this story and enjoy reading it so far.

I can't wait for the new version. I'm sure it will be great!

Glad to know you're going to continue this but with a newer version. While you're at it, I'd just like to point out that there seem to be "event problems" with the earlier chapters, like the length of their schooling. And it also seems you rushed the romance between Harry/Cho, not that I'm complaining, I'm a sucker for this pairing. But on some of the scenes, I think you went a little overboard. Anyways, I'm really looking forward to the rewrite of this story! Hope you update the soonest!

Great story so far. Hope you will update. Is anyone else gonna become a redeemed?

good story, can't wait to read more of it

This simply can not be the end! You can't leave this on a cliffhanger so steep its almost 90 degrees! Oh I hope you'll up-date very soon! Things were starting to get even more interesting!

this is an amazing story, but wht r u gonna have harry and cho do ablout fudge and the ministry, and who is dumbledore's teacher.

Awesome story! I'm loving the gradually increasing relationship between Cho and Harry, and how real the time frame is for Harry's increase in power and skill. It makes a difference to the stories where Harry beds the girl and becomes all-powerful in the first chapter.

The writing and grammar is also exceptional, and, since I'm a mascot for good grammar, makes an addictive read since it's actually written properly. I also like your imagination when it comes to characters, since yours seem to intergrate quite niceley into the Harry Potter universe. Your plotline is also very well thought out, too. It leads on flawlessly from the Tri-Wizard tournament as if it were meant to happen. At the moment I have no reccomendations other than to keep up the awesome work! Well done!

I only have two questions. Will the famous Phoenix and Raven tatoo make an appearance again? Also, since Harry is now a fully fledged redeemed and king, where does the pheonix and raven prophecy come into it? Sorry if this was mentioned in earlier chapters, I might have overlooked it.

Stairhopper out.

Well then If Harry is more powerful then Merlin and Dumbldore then who's going to stand in his way if he becomes evil and intoxicated with power?

Any way this was an amazing story. There were a few missed word and miss-spelled words, however on a whole it was an excellently wirtten story, do continue the good work and writing.

DG

OMG! Awesome story! I've just finished up to chapter 28 and I love it! Are you gonna develop Arthur's character more?

(A suggestion: Personally, I don't like the swordsmanship... I think epic duels between sorcerers would be more interesting than slice n' dice, but it's your story...)

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

(PS. I can't believe your story is only in the triple digit reviews...it reads like one with thousands of reviews...)

I foresee epic amounts of ass kicking in the future. Also, kick Fudge once and for all!