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I liked this in a weird way :D

This is different than anything I have read :D

This is one of the few tragic stories that I really enjoyed. It was written so amazingly well, the tone, the atmosphere- just so good! Really great job with this!

Interesting... I like it. Lol. Well written. One thing though... I did not like how Sakura appearing to be a pity party. I don't know. I think I just have issues with her. Maybe because she completely ignored Naruto and constantly mocked and teased him no matter what he did for her. And I kinda love Naruto. lol. ANYWAYS! Stories awesome~ and i love it. *favorites*

OMFG this was so freaking sad! but you wrote it so beautifully. everything just flowed so well. ughh, i'm completely at a loss for words lol. It was really beautiful. Loved it3

I really like the idea behind this. It's different, but very tragic. But what I love most of all was the tone that you used, taken from the point of view as if someone was whispering the tale on the streets of Konoha.

I don't like that you made Sakura and Naruto die.

The village wouldn't let Sasuke come back if he wanted to...

You want a review, you get a review :)

So, I would like to say as the very first thing, that you had really a good idea with this. I like the way it is told as if scraped up from different rumours around the village. You get extra points for that too.

Only, there's one thing that somehow doesn't fit for me - The whole dynamics between the three is reversed now, so why does the ever-indifferent blank-eyed Uchiha scream when Naruto dies?

Otherwise, as I said, nice piece and well done indeed. :-)

Very beautiful and tragic. This has to be one of my favorite stories of all time.