Awesome. Just plain awesome. Nice rhyming.

LOL - this just became my favourite poem of all time! :D

Funniest thimg I've read that my computer would let me! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!

I liked it. Good chapter :)

I was laughing the whole time. Great job!

It does have more than a hint of Dr. Seuss, no worries! :D

Should I be feeling sorry for Wolf or happy for Alex?

Like it

haha

this is pretty good

i always wanted to try writing a poem but that nevr seems to work out . . . m

:)

oww

Haha brilliant.

Don't worry if you're worried about your poetry writing skills...Mine are worse. I'll give you a sample...Umm keep in mind I wrote this at exams time last year, in an English lesson, when I should have been revising. :D

One fine day,

In the middle of May,

A stinky horse lay,

In a stack of hay.

His name was Fread.

It ate a lot of bread.

But someone shot its head,

And then he was dead.

Muwahahaha. I need sleep. Sorry. I'm slightly worried that I still remember that :

o Not bad! I couldn't stop smiling when I saw that Wolf messed with Cub and he RAN him over with a car! o

heh that just goes to show you: never mess with alex at bb :)

Nice ending...