Wow, this was so moving. You did a great job of characterizing Jack, he is so much like Hotch. The comment about him being a great prosecutor was a nice touch.
I love how he helped Hotch make some progress in forgiving himself too.

Very sweet and nicely written.
Thanks for posting.

Very beautiful story, well written Loved it ️

this was beautiful

Wow this was absolutely awesome, the best, I absolutely loved this, goes without saying that I love these two and their interactions, pity we don't see much of them on the show, wish we did I'd love to see the Hotch / Jack show.

Okay back to the story, truly amazing the portrayal of the two was so very well done and absolutely touched my heard ... and yes you did have me shed a tear. The weaving of the story was very well done from a simply task to the connection between father and son, was a nice linkage to Haley too.

Very nice, very nice indeed, throughly enjoyed this, great work.

Very good story. Thanks for sharing.

Hey, I totally loved this! And I completely agree with you I want to see Hotch's scars too. I also want to learn more about his childhood cuz he dropped the hint he was abused by his dad in season 1 :)

This is really good. Adults can still learn from their children. :)

Very touching. :)

awwwwwwwww i loved it lots!

OMG! This is totally and absolutely a beautiful story.

I can't believe I I had not read this before it's so sweet and lovely. I love the way in which Jack helps his daddy to see the good side of things as only a child can do it. Just wonderful.

What a lovely story.

Of the few authors on FanFiction I really like you are one of the best.

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Oh my... this was soooo insightful, simple in its telling yet so profound and raw, I almost gave in to tears when Hotch made the decision to face his inner fears. And Jack, dear little Jack, he might never realize how he saved his daddy that moment.

Excellently done again!

Awww. *sniffles* Little Hotch.

This is fantastic - so sweet and moving. I particularly loved the messing around with the shaving foam and the tickling, it was like seeing a cloud lift from Hotch for a moment even before the end. I suppose you could even say that was the start of his mental recovery.