Great story,hope to see more from you soon.

Kind of sad at the end there but still fantastic

AWWEEEE ITS CUTE HOW HERMIONE IS JEALOUS OVER LUNA AND IN THE END HARRY'S IS HERS

Nice little oneshot!

I have to say, you've got a real talent for oneshots.

that was kind of cheesy but it was still fun
Draco122

Love it

Awesome story.

A cute story, it’s the way it should’ve been in cannon. Thank you.

Good story

I need some crackers for that fic. It was touching with Harry and Luna being friends, but the end felt liked it was rushed.

Nice fluffy story and thanks for sharing!

i really liked the ending i thought it was cute!

This story was very good.

It was a very funny and romantic story.

It was good that Harry and Hermione got together.

Keep up the good work.

It works as HErmione realizes that her feelings realy are retunred. It was a nice build-up, allowing her to understand slowly with a nice ending. On the other hand, this could be a prelude to a mcuh longer story where they as a couple would have to contend with the youngest Weasleys and Dumbledore at least trying to break them up, if not cause them more harm.

Love the way you used Luna in this one, plus it shows the underlying friendship all three have.

I do see this dynamic and it works better than the canon of the quartet H/R & G/H. I've never liked Luna being given a character we never see to marry!

Neville is a much better fit unless harry needed a 2nd wife!

;-)

So overall a nice H/Hr one-shot!