| Reviews for Shock |
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   IchikoKitsuneKoumori chapter 1 . 11/2/2017 I'm crying here. why? why? oh god |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2013 I'm bawling my friggin eyes out here. Literally. Why Annie? :(( But well done, so much emotion in such a short story... well done! |
| Foxbear chapter 1 . 12/3/2011 Oh my, this is horrible and beautiful at the same time. |
| Lerrinus chapter 1 . 11/13/2011 O. M. G! Awesomely written! Watery vision prevents me from typing more...*sniffles* |
| Hadrianna chapter 1 . 7/16/2011 Wow, that one really got to me *still sniffling*. |
| CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 4/18/2010 Hm quite gruesome especially when the fact the girl is torn in two thus the reason for her 'lighter weight' is revealed. Ironhide's response is perfect and isn't it great how the mind works sometimes? Will seeing the ball instead of the blood and then a melted ball (perfectly ordinary for someone who has a friend who regularly melts things i suppose, even without factoring in the insanity). Also liked how you still brought across that somewhere Will knew the truth but wasnt willing to see it yet. Very good little drabble... |
| Steven Kodaly chapter 1 . 4/15/2010 I think that I prefer your comedy pieces, truth be told; not that you did a bad job, in fact this was very well done. I simply like being able to smile after I close my web browser. Now I shall need to find some music to which I can rock out, as that is the only cure for a proper tragedy. |
| Invalid Surver chapter 1 . 3/5/2010 aw... that was so sad... :( it was very well written though :) nice job! very promising! :) |
| Darklight8121 chapter 1 . 1/13/2010 wow. Uhh. wow. Dark. Sad. I've very rarely *enjoyed* having my haeart ripped out. This is one of those very rare stories that did that to me. Exceellent. Nothing more poignant than the death of a child to illustrate human fragility. |
| varsitylove16 chapter 1 . 12/20/2009 That... Wow. You're really good at angst. 0.0 ~VLS~ |
| EdwardsSonnet chapter 1 . 12/16/2009 Oh wow. I like it a lot even though it was... |
| JuJill chapter 1 . 12/13/2009 ;-; That's so sad! I hope Will get over his shock and Ironhide ca help enough so that he won't break completely... JuJill |
| Kotomi Miyamura chapter 1 . 12/12/2009 :'( Very well-written. I love the way you interpreted Will's reaction to Annabelle's death. Poor Will and Ironhide :( |
| Emmers224 chapter 1 . 12/12/2009 Oh. My. Gosh... You've got me! I MUST read more! Poor Will. Wow thats so sad... And Ironhide... I'm definitely interested. Please continue. |
| Princess Schatje Dreamer chapter 1 . 12/12/2009 He knows. In his own abstract way, he knows. The comment on water slipping away - the comparison to life, the bone-white of her hair... the 'melted rubber ball', the lack of weight... Oh Will you poor thing, being tortured so by Aina... And 'Hide... /his sparkling/... Damn gurl, you did good :3 |
