Hi,
this story is really great. I love it. You did excellent at writing. Well done, really.
There's just one thing that is a bit odd to me. It is about the great sentence. You know, I speak German as my first language. The sentence you wrote, "Es ist Knoblauch?" means " it is garlic?" Because of its structure, it isn't a question, therefore the question mark is quite irritating. Otherwise, the question "is it garlic?" would be "Ist es Knoblauch?". But that was the only thing I noticed.

Is K-Unit supervisoring the team around Alex?

this story was really good but I was a bit sad that at the end Alex said that Snake would never see him again even if it was true.

I really liked this story, lovely how you played around with the different characters and their issues!

I just gotta say that well... she was definitely not fluent in three languages! (I speak both Swedish and Finnish as my native tongue, and the words weren't quite right placed, she wouldn't pass for a native in my opinion)

Anyway, I think this story was really nice, and definitely unique - none of those Alex-goes-back-to-BB-clichés! Good work!

3 Anna

Great story but FYI, women aren't allowed to join the SAS.

That was a kinda, well, morbid ending. Kitten died! Well, Cub did warn them, I guess. Good story, though :)

awwwwwwwwwwww yayyy for puppy

luv the ending! its so sweet!

I really liked your story, the SAS camp with Alex is love 3 I have to point out though that there are some grammar mistakes in the linguistics parts in the Swedish, Finnish and German sections (I study them so I know). In Swedish you used definite articles when you weren't supposed to, in Finnish you had problems with conjugating some words and in German you made a minor mistake with the word order. Not that the mistakes were anything major but I'm keen on pointing out grammar mistakes :P

omg!

amazing!

interesting story _

your story is just great :D

I like it.

hah loved it

this is a fantastic story. definatly a favourite. )

Just thought I'd toss this out while I'm working through your story (which I'm enjoying by the way): they usually don't allow women in special forces because they generally are not capable of physical requirements and because rape is so effective as a torture mechanism.