Yuo shjould write the one in the cupboard. your Break is so fantastic, I've read all your Pandora hearts fanfictions multiple times, and now I'm finally reviewing them. Break is just to complaicated and silly and messed up, but you get him in the best way. You manage to make this story erotic, while at the same time Break is totally messing with Liam, as always. I wonder, is Emily still on his shoulder? XD

You used the paper in your writing very well, I think it was very sexy the way you described it. I'll probably never be able to look at a library the same way! XD

As terrible as this fact really is the more I think about it, given I was a die-hard Break/Sharon fan before I'd seen or read Pandora (no joke) and as of Ch49 that seems more than ever quite on its way to becoming canon, I think this is not only my favorite PH fic I've read, but also the most in-character for Break I've seen. x'D; As much as I adore sincere!Break and people playing with what we know of that side of him and so-on, this utterly off-his-rocker view (as we more often see him anyway) is captured SO well in this, and just... YES.

So many seem to think that insanity is equal to randomness and/or a license to do just whatever (for Break or any char), and that gets really annoying seeing so often. THIS though. OH MY GOD THIS. x'D From the moment we saw Break was hiding among the papers I fell out laughing and screaming "YES" at realizing this TOTALLY sounded like something he would do. xD And it just kept getting better as he stayed completely equal parts romantic and mind-screw. ...All right, so probably more the latter, but omg yes.

For random specifics, Break's gasp/laugh-thing and the line "or what cabinet they'd have to crawl through to get there": PURE WIN. As much as this has been said you know this by now, but it can't be said enough.

Thank you SO much for this. x'3 I am STILL laughing even as I finish this review. Amazing job.

Wha-

holy.. uh-m crap? -Uh?

That was way hotter than I could have ever imagined. I'm so dumb-founded. I always thought they had a thing together, but this is the first Break/Liam fic I've ever read. And that had to be the hottest situation anyone could have ever thought up for them.

And in a sick, terrible way, the line you used to describe Break's panting/close to climax sound was horrifically hot.

Holy crap.

*favefavefave*

LOL THISSS:

"Reim does not dare ask or even try to imagine where Break's favorite place might be (or what cupboard they might have to crawl through to get there)."

Yo! I decided to point out exactly why I like this. I know I was kind of vague and unhelpful on LJ. I'm going to talk about the stuff I liked and thought about when I first read it.

So, you were saying that this seemed to be a typical Break-taking-advantage-of-Liam type thing, but actually it's really different from the others. I actually don't think this is at all out of character and I don't see what you would do differently. What I got from this is that they had a pre-established relationship and Break decided to jump Liam in the library. Liam being all flustered, in this case, is completely in character in my opinion - they're in a LIBRARY. XD I love Liam. But you know that. Okay. What I don't like to see (well, okay, I still like to see it, but I don't think it's really in character) is Break *randomly* deciding to molest Liam, and this is... not that. This is funny, in character, and really hot.

On to specific lines and details that I read too much into and really liked.

I really liked that Break was naked. Nakedness implies intimacy, and especially in Break's situation where there's all the different opinions about that because of his seal and blah blah blah, I find that to be important. I don't know when this is set or when it was written but I mean, it's casual, so I guess that doesn't really matter much. I don't know, it was something I picked up on when I read it, so whether it was accidental or not, I still appreciated it.

"Reim sputters, helplessly, as more of Break's skin appears, paper-pale, as fine as unwritten parchment... as Reim already knows it is, rather well, although he swears he never thought of Break's skin exactly that way before."

Again, implying intimacy and familiarity. A lot of the time they're not portrayed as an intimate pair and it's because Break won't allow it, and Liam just takes what he can get. Like, the we-can-have-sex-but-don't-touch-me type thing. Just the fact that Liam was familiar with Break's skin and thought about it made me really happy.

"...torn between fury and arousal at the thought of all those precious sheets of paper sliding between Break's thighs, pressed up against his flesh..."

...No, that's just really sexy.

"He gasps as he feels the smooth, cool glide of paper pressed between their bodies, and Break's hot puff of laughter on his throat."

Okay, so I already sort of mentioned this, but not only is this crack-molesting free, it's also angst-free, which (at the time I was reading this... no, still now as well) was really rare.

"Reim knows that, any minute now, Break will push him down, or more likely pull him down on top of him, guiding him in to bring him to climax inside of him, just as he usually does."

I so loved this back then. I still love it now. ...I can't justify myself on that one.

"From the familiar, high-pitched sound like a gasp of hysterical laughter in his ear, he knows Break is on the verge as well."

Again with that intimacy thing. That's such a great detail. 3

This is kind of weird, but I also really loved how easily Break gets off.

Um...I hope I explained a little better. I know there are still some things I wasn't able to really articulate, but... I really do love this. Thanks for writing! :)

Paperwork fetish 8D! I never thought of that, but it seems very interesting the way you wrote it, especially compelled with Break's albino complexion, I can see Liam behaving like that.

Waahh I want to know where Breaks favorite place is :3

Oh Reim! Haha that was a fail in my point of view (a good one though).

Wow, I feel so sorry for Reim XD But I don't feel sorry for Break haha.

I didn't know you liked using Reim instead of Liam (even though it is the correct form) but anyway, that was really good. Though it was rated Mature, it was pretty funny reading it ;)

This amused me on so many levels.

That was awesome! and hot! GREAT writing of this pairing and wonderfully done characterization! Very good! *hearts and stars*

There aren't enough Break/Reim stories on here! I love your characterization and your style. Thanks for writing this, it's really good!

~Kyuuketsuki_Nekko