Loved your humor and the hotness. The characters' voices are spot on. Hope you come back to this pairing..

Damn, that was good!

i'McCoy'/i would've been just fine.
That's supposed to be italics, right? Didn't work, somehow.

lol

seeing that just yesterday i saw the episode... i believe that this story melds very well into it! :)

Great! Fluff (sex) without any fluff (emotional/caretaking/angsty). Exactly what I was looking for, hot and to the point.

"Doctor McCoy, this is highly irregular, even for you." Hee.

he Vulcan muttered something into his neck, something that sounded suspiciously like 'fascinating'

My favorite line,

followed by:

"So are you ever going to call me 'Captain' again?"

"No," Spock said flatly.

McCoy rolled his eyes. "Welcome back, Spock."

This was lovely, you're beginning to convince me of being a spock mccoy shipper... almost... ;)

... Wow... I have no words for this story of yours... Hm... in my opinion the sex came a little too early for my liking. It was all sudden... but hey, I'm not exactly complaining. It was still a very good story. I liked it. You are now officially on my favorite authors list. Good job. 3 Keep up the good writing!