Can I adopt this?

Damn, I would have loved for this story to continue, it’s been nearly a decade though, so I suppose there’s no hope for that huh?
It’s a very interesting idea though, would love to see someone adopt this and continue it.

Hermione or Dean

I would have liked more parkour action than plot! I found you in a parkour search.

Nice start, but in chapter 2, paragraph 5 after the letter, the last sentence looks a bit weird... Anyway it will be interesting to see freerunning at Hogwarts.

Yea I would be slightly scared too dumbles

This is a clever premise... Shame you stopped.

Only 2 comments/suggestions-for-improvement (if you want those):
1. The dialogue is a bit stilted, but your physical-motion-description is great. I wonder whether you could tell the entire story without dialogue?
2. You have, in chapter 1, Dave running in jeans. While it's possible that these jeans are magic, I've always found that jeans are really uncomfortable when doing anything that requires good leg separation. The flow may feel better if he's wearing sweats... (Or, maybe this would be a good point to weed out the details-that-distract from the details-that-are-necessary?)

Thanks all the best, LO

Surprise character - Either Draco, Ron, or Hermione

I'll admit, I found this by googling the words "Harry Potter" and "parkour". I figured it wasn't quite so nutty that no one else would have thought of it.
It's only two chapters long so there isn't much to review, but I would like to know a little about the characters. We already know about Hogwarts and the Marauders-tell us about Lisa. If you're going to have OCs, develop them a little. Write some Hogwarts bits with dueling and the advantages a parkour!Harry would have. Just add…something. Some substance.

sorry i dont like the ending (harrys comment on wanting to have met voldemort)

i like this chapter its googd and is engaging me to read on. one suggestion though change the appearence of dave the freerunner he seems quite intimidating for younger readers to relate to, and me being 14 if i saw this "dave" walking by i would think "nob!"
yours sincerely fellow harry potter fan and freerunner.

nice story, PLEASE continue this. update it soon please!

sad think it was left behind this one... and... the surprise is draco malfoy! yeah im bad at guesting

...shame this seems abandoned...anyway, is the charecter Hermione?

Thanks for posting,

TKB17

is the surprise character...

- Neville Longbottom?

- Seamus Finnigan?

- Dean Thomas?

- Oliver Wood?

- Cedric Diggory?

- Blaise Zambini?

- Nymphadora Tonks?

by the way great fic,i'm excited 2 have found a fic dealing in parkour!