This was a very Well-written, sad and bitter Story.
Bella is my fave Character from HP so i really love this portrayed of her, especially since this is a Voldemort Wins- AU and it’s very Original and strong.
The end shook me because I didn’t excpect it until the Part from the book.
I don’t Know if I’m happy with it, because Neville interruptes her suffers with a painless death even after what she had done to his parents, or if I wanted to let both of them have a HE.
Anyway, this is the best AU Voldemort FF I’ve ever read and it’s sad that it’s very underrated

I absolutely cannot overstate how good I think this story is. The pacing, the tiny hints that were dropped here and there, the way you make us sympathise with Bellatrix only to give us that ending; this has got to be one of my favourite HP stories of all time.

T.T Okay then T.T Who knew I could be sad when Belatrix died?

Beautifully written

Why are all your stories tear jerkers? D: D:

Beautiful and heartbreaking...

oh my god.

This story was rather unique, and really touching. It's quite like I imagined Neville... He would indeed care for Bellatrix, he's just a person like that. Even in the end he cares for her... Angsty and bittersweet. Loved it!

RESPECT. That was deep, bro.

I know Bellatrix was fond of her sister, so I had an idea that no matter how messed up she was, she did have a heart. An almost nonexistent, tiny, shriveled up heart, but a heart nonetheless.

I think you got Neville's character right on. No matter how much he hated Bellatrix, I doubt he'd be able to kill her off in cold blood like that.

Oh my god. This was beautifully tragic, everything about it. The way Bellatrix completely breaks down, the way she is forced to torture her family and the curse loses all joy for her, the way Kreacher distespects her, the way Neville takes care of her, all of it. It was emotional and eerie, and the writing is fantastic. Every day goes by in the same fashion, but the repetition shows how things subtly change. It was so sad, and although I suppose the ending was peaceful and far better than anything else that could have happened the whole thing was very upsetting.

This is one of the best pieces of fiction I have ever read, fan-made or otherwise. Both Neville and Bellatrix are completely believable characters, to the point where I actually felt a bit sad at the end of this (which is something that rarely happens, as I am not a sentimental person). I especially like how they didn't actually start a romantic relationship - most authors probably would have done that, and it would have taken away a lot from the complexity of the story.

This is seriously fucking great.

Wow. That has to be the realist story I've ever read on this site. There are now words to describe how beautiful that was. I'm utterly speechless right now, it was so amazing

very good, very realistic, i like it a lot.

WHOA. That was amazing, right there, that was. LOVE!

Could you, pretty please with cream and a strawberry (I was never one to like cherries) on top, write another fanfic in which Lucius Malfoy watches his family being tortured and their "recovery" and his reaction to when Bellatrix comes to visit? Sort of like a...I wouldn't say prequel/sequel...sort of like a fanfic FOR the fanfic, if you get what I'm trying to say.

Anyways, GREAT job!

I read this on FictionAlley, while FFN was down. I must say, I am beyond in love with this story, and I have recommended it to a few people.

You did an AMAZING job with this. I read it, an I felt this small chill. With the last part, everything fell into place. If there was a single typo, I didn't notice it. The story sucked me in.

This is fanastic.